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Old 08-23-05, 12:32 AM   #1
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This is a song bout all the shit that I'm really goin through right now that has me stressed out and all that shit, hopefully yall like it...leave feedback
I will rtf
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Old 08-23-05, 12:23 PM   #2
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comon people uppin
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Old 08-23-05, 06:12 PM   #3
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shit hot son.........keep that shit up son......that "On The Grind" shit was Fire too...lol.......u kno wassup son, holla at me
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Old 08-23-05, 07:38 PM   #4
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listening: beats cool... nice intro.. whos that singing? the lyrics is good.. flow is on point. and delivery is on point as well.. im really feelin the beat.. the lyrics is good.. really feelin the singing lol.. whos that? seriously is that you? damn dude i seriously need you in one of my tracks lol.. cuz i cant sing lol
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Old 08-24-05, 04:29 AM   #5
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naw that aint me son thats my cuz
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Old 08-24-05, 02:37 PM   #6
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listening through some better than average hoe system speakers. beat choice is cool good sample.

Quality is shakey. Flow is on, lyrics follow a point for sure, presence is there. Shit man. Nothing at all wrong with this track cept the quality man. I'm impressed. Even the singing on the chorus worked well. Ahoulda just re-sang a back-up vocal instead of copy it. Adds far more depth, specially for a song. The song was hot man. On some real ass shit. I was surprised man. Drop more tracks.
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Old 08-24-05, 10:26 PM   #7
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Thanks man I will
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Old 08-25-05, 12:17 AM   #8
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damn...good shit man...im suprised...

flow is coo....man everything is good...

except for quality...if you got in the studio...this could be some good stuff man...

singing on the hook works real well.......everything came together well in this track...i dunno what to tell you is wrong man...good shit
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Old 08-27-05, 11:05 PM   #9
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uppin this................
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Old 08-28-05, 07:04 PM   #10
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comon man dont sleep on this................
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Old 09-03-05, 05:18 PM   #11
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comon people will rtf
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Old 09-18-05, 06:10 PM   #12
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uppin this will RTF
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Old 09-21-05, 07:56 PM   #13
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I'm returnin the favor fa ya...

your flow was really, really on.. the singing, i liked (the chorus).. everything came together nicely... You are very talented, I liked how you made this track as a whole.

Keep doing what you do. Good job.
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Old 09-21-05, 10:27 PM   #14
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Yo man, stop uppin this track. It's a good-ass track, but since no one in the songs forum knows you yet they aren't checking the song liek that. It's not your fault, everyone goes through it at first blah blah blah etc etc etc. Just drop new ones, then re-up this one later. 1
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Old 09-25-05, 08:48 AM   #15
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Returning the favor here...

Nice intro, speaking truth right there. The beat's cool, flow is on point throughout the entire song, kept it nice and consistent. Tell your cuz he sings real nice, I feel the chorus is a good add-on to the track as a whole. Lyrics are definitely on point, presence is there...

I can't really give any bad comments on this track...it was straight up solid, enjoyed listening to it!

Keep it up man
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