*.Fame.* vs InfiniteStan
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-24-05 at 10:40 PM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

InfiniteStan has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 07:41 PM.

Fame... i like da name so dont put it to shame/
iam the one on top/ the one with all the fame/
notice im using baby words with one syllable/
i teach everyone a lesson/just to be predictable/
predictable ill be/ cuz i know cats like u cant see me/
i know ur new at this rap site/hope im not my wasting my time on this cat that i dislike/only thing i see in the future is INFINITE/and fame at the bottom wich i will be ending it/.after im done with this little rhyme/ make sure u save it/so next time u battle a cat/u open it up and embrace it/now im gonn make this short/ the mind of a genius hurts/..........

*.Fame.* has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 08:09 PM.

i'ma cut this man up tight n put his lame name in the can 2night
whack as it gets...he's infinite stan cuz he's an obsessed fan for life
his bitch's folding while he's with the boys playing stiff-holding
you got a lie-sense (license) to wrap (rap) that messed like retards giftrolling
the sight of you makes me sick,so fall back for i break ur hips n turn it blue
your raps are a joke n they played...we should label you 'I am-used (amused)
why i even bother spittin,i could do nutin n still beat you with this
suks too,i ain't got no personals to use,cuz no one knows who you is
you already gonna spit shit,so you've already been humiliated
n as for ur mother n her pants,shit,i shot it up cuz in-it-I-ated (intiate)
I'ma still win this bitch,n I ain't even write this shit,so I laughed last
cuz take a look kid,in my books,this whole verse is half assed

I ain't even bother -__-

i like ur style man!! i aint hatting!!!.........................yeah i am a fan.. but i know ur too...hahahahahahhahahahahahaaa

^^LoL

uppin4votes..............................

Voted For: InfiniteStan

this battle was alright but i think stan dude got it......his lyrics were better but struture needs to be fixed......fame i dint really like your verse u had punches but they reallly didnt connect as where stan i was feeling most of your verse but you need to fix your structure so my vote goes to stan

This was feedback posted for *.Fame.*
 

ur use of font & how ur forcin wordplays gives u away on who u are................... just to let u know

uppin4votes.......................................

upping for votes~~~~~~~~

InfiniteStan Vs. FAME

This was feedback posted for InfiniteStan
 

Wtf Kinda Bullshit Verse Is That??????????????????

Voted For: *.Fame.*

punches - fame, you had more complex punches that hit harder than he did.

flow- fame, he had betetr structure so the flow was betetr in his verse.

structure- fame, infinite had a wack structure, he needs to make his lines same length, he had way stretched lines. fame had good structure.

multis - fame had a few in his verse, infinite had none

wordplay - fame used a few.

personals- fame, alot betetr punches with personals

overall fame had the better verse with winning in every department, infinite u need to make lines same length and make ur punches harder with using more wordplay.

Wtf?? What Kinda Bullshit Are You!!!!! If U Aint Gonn Vote Then Stay Ur Ass Out.. And If U Wanna Battle Then Set That Shit Up.. . Hope Ur Verses Are As Big As Your Fuckin Mouth!!!!!!!!!

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