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Finishing Move's (From RB)
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2391438
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205845 It's Calliburs, Dawg Like When I'm Stepping To Challengers Cause I Handle These Cat's, I'm Wrecking These Amateurs It's Track Time Run Around Your Flows And Whack Rhymes Cause Like Old Folks, Foe's Hope, But Only Get Flat Lines I Got The Flow, Your An Auto Ho, You Don't Need A Key So I Got These Cat's Trapped, An End Up Leaving Me Feed Your Reading To See, If I Fell Off, But I'm Leaving You G My Mixtape CD's In Repeat, Behind Me You Keeping Your Seat Cut You Up Like Dj's Flea The Scene, I Don't Need A Beat The Lyrics Are Cold See, Repping The Old Peeps I Fold Heat No Flow Geeks, They Finding You With Some Cold Seek1 The Code's Repeat The Foe's Need Glasses To See Torch I Got The Doe G, Dawg Plus Your Crew Need's A Re Force This Is A Free Verse, I'm Dope Chea I Know The T Hurts 2 Your Styles On Re-Verse, I'm A Mean Cruse Who'll Leave Feed First 1. Cold Seeking Missles Lmao! 2.T=Truth Sick With Multi's Should Of Bin In My Soundclick But I Need A New Mic |
Nice flow right here. Good use of multis, good content, i could spitthis from start to finish on first glance with out fail, shows its a nice solid verse.
Would seriously love to hear this audio. its got that thing about it that would semingly explode audio wise. good drop, not one flaw about it. TC |
Thank You.
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To The Top Man...
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yeah you had a lot of multis..some cool rhymes..good flow..and were you ever here before? cause i think i remember you.
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Good Looking With The Feed Son.
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Pretty decent, would of far better as an audio drop, The rhymes would of had more effect in audio, but i liked it, good read right here man, 7/10...keep doin ya thing..
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Can't wait to hear it as an audio drop, stayed nice consistent with the hot multis and the flow was just on point. Content was aight, vocab was there as well.
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Thank You Both Of You. :thumbup:
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it was definately cool at the start, because you were rhyming multi syllable words.......at the end there, you just keep rhyming seek and bleek, etc......sounded really dry......but not bad man, just expand your vocabulary to your verses, and creativity.......this woulda sounded better with a beat though, keep up man
rtf on this http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206108 or the one in my sig |
Moved to freestyles
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Moral..........
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Huh?? And Why Was This Moved?.........
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upping for fam.
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