Sumthin
 

wut type of man talks shit bout a man
but when that man shows up he shakin that mans hand
most of these niggaz aint real smile in yo face talk shit behind ya back
but its all good cuz they dont want it to tha point where them guns click clack
Prince Koopa tha regining champ
he spit game to hoes n make they pussies get damp
err body should know who i am
Its C-H-O-S-E-N which it know tha name that they say runnin tha rap game
neva behind a lame just a nigga that'll spit sumthin i fuck up ya brain
fuck being a rapper im a lyricst
n most niggaz hate it cuz they cant Fuck Wit Prince
im young cool hazel eyed yella boy
but when it comes ta plex please dont mess wit me boy
iono come to this site that often
cuz im on tha block tryin to stay fuck outta a coffin
no bullshit iono need punch lines
cuz my tyoe of rhymes make niggaz punch they nine's
n half of ya'll rappers be claimin ya'll bang
but in ya own fucking streets i aint even hearing ya name
on this flow i stay spittin tha Flames
Im 16 Prince Koopa Ya'll Aint stoppin MY Regin



Outro: I Aint Talkin Bout Nobody On Here Cuz I Dont Rap On This Site That Much

But U Can Take It How U Want It Ya Heard

Chosen a.ka. Tha Kid A.ka. Tha Prince Koopa A.k.a. ThA Prince Of Tha Streets
Also Known As The Forsaken Lyricst

Structure was a problem fo me, it didnt let me create a flow in my head.....try and make lines end close to eachother.
Your vocabulary was not good, was simply wording...nothing was inhanced.
Your multis lacked presence dont feel they were good at all.
Concept was iight it wasnt all that bad...just mad simple....
Overall 4.5/10 keep elevatin and make sure u have those qualities in ur o/ms

along with emotion and imagery that helps a lot..........and u have to many akas now thats just whack :)

um coldnt get a flow and thevocab wasnt that good could be alot betta but keep ritten