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09-10-05, 10:47 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Sumthin
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wut type of man talks shit bout a man
but when that man shows up he shakin that mans hand most of these niggaz aint real smile in yo face talk shit behind ya back but its all good cuz they dont want it to tha point where them guns click clack Prince Koopa tha regining champ he spit game to hoes n make they pussies get damp err body should know who i am Its C-H-O-S-E-N which it know tha name that they say runnin tha rap game neva behind a lame just a nigga that'll spit sumthin i fuck up ya brain fuck being a rapper im a lyricst n most niggaz hate it cuz they cant Fuck Wit Prince im young cool hazel eyed yella boy but when it comes ta plex please dont mess wit me boy iono come to this site that often cuz im on tha block tryin to stay fuck outta a coffin no bullshit iono need punch lines cuz my tyoe of rhymes make niggaz punch they nine's n half of ya'll rappers be claimin ya'll bang but in ya own fucking streets i aint even hearing ya name on this flow i stay spittin tha Flames Im 16 Prince Koopa Ya'll Aint stoppin MY Regin Outro: I Aint Talkin Bout Nobody On Here Cuz I Dont Rap On This Site That Much But U Can Take It How U Want It Ya Heard Chosen a.ka. Tha Kid A.ka. Tha Prince Koopa A.k.a. ThA Prince Of Tha Streets Also Known As The Forsaken Lyricst |
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09-10-05, 11:41 AM | #2 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 28AD 5545
Structure was a problem fo me, it didnt let me create a flow in my head.....try and make lines end close to eachother.
Your vocabulary was not good, was simply wording...nothing was inhanced. Your multis lacked presence dont feel they were good at all. Concept was iight it wasnt all that bad...just mad simple.... Overall 4.5/10 keep elevatin and make sure u have those qualities in ur o/ms along with emotion and imagery that helps a lot..........and u have to many akas now thats just whack
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09-10-05, 01:27 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Drop a link or this will be closed
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09-18-05, 07:21 PM | #4 | |||||||
Bringin The Rukas
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IP: 3240 794D
um coldnt get a flow and thevocab wasnt that good could be alot betta but keep ritten
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