We Dont Care U Leave feed i'll RTF
 

yeah lets see here

www.soundclick.com/jayjking

"We Dont Care"

yeahhhhh lol its nice i'm likin it


will edit with links


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209899
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209947

i'm feeling the beat... your chorus could use some work, try not to stress your last word so hard, it sound forced. Your flow sounds better from what I heard from you before. Ya lyrics are aight. It's a relaxed track, nice to hear those every now and then. Not bad. RTF... hit the link in my sig. :thumbup:

alright i got u tahnks for the feed

I like the beat you use, nice n smooth my type of beat. I personally like your voice not to high not to low, the hook you did was pretty good. the volume on your vocals were on a perfect level. your flow is pretty good i'd say, emotion is pretty good too, nice dubs too gives it some nice sound and creativity, gives your track a real nice sound ya know. overall i think this song was good, i like your style and shit. keep up man

can you rtf here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209869

1 luv

alright i got you thanks for the feed

listening:
beat is dope lol, your voice dosint fit with the beat, no hate, dope chorus seriously i love it, nice effect, who made the beat? nice verse, nice flow and nice presence in the song, it sounds like u had fun doin it, mmm i dunno maybe the best ive heard from u seriously

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thanks for the feed...really preciate it

listening..

this is a smooth beat...i like it...chorus is nice just that you seemed to fall of the flow cos of ur breathe..as for ur verse its all kinna 'ahhh...ahhh at the end of some words wasnt really really diggin that but u flowed pretty nice...gd looking

word up..

upppin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

uppin once again

Beat: decent...kinda old schoolish
Flow: it's on beat...nothing major either way
Rhyming: decent at best...nothing too intricate
Delivery: I like your dubbing...voice a bit raspy/monotonous


Overall: not a bad track...not great...



6.5/10