SenseR - # 1 Contender
 

this is some lyrical shit i flipped yesterday mornin i've been bumpin it nonstop i hope yall do the same Ez 1ne...

www.soundclick.com/wegotnextvolume1

MY 2 links...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2467443
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208676

yo this shit wuz plain sick.......yo man i wuz feelin it man..............

pz

~1~

lol hahaha good looks partna dont sleep on this people Ez 1ne...

Aiight listenin opener is tight flow is on as always beat is coo am feelin tha concept overall good track son def worth tha d/l fa reelz stay up =1=...

Ok Listening....


Beat is dope as shit......dude your flow is fuckin sick on this.....seriously i love your flow on this man....shit is insane......

Hook is good....pretty catchy...fits well....

*downloads song*

this is BY FAR in my opinion your best song....cause of your flow...and lyrically its nice too...at some points if feels like some DZK crazy ass shit......props on this man....


PLEASE RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showt...560#post2467560

lol yeah i feel the same way fam good looks on the feed i cant stop playin this track i think i did well on this and to think i wrote it on 30 minutes not bad iight yall keep it comin tell ya mother tell ya homies tell everyone you know to log on to Rv and peep this fire Ez 1ne....

yea son...first thing flow wise you came thru on this...good shit...only thing I would say is you held same flow too long.......hook was koo....the addlibs brought it out made it catchy...delivery was good......lyrics was ah'ight u had sum spots were u said sum witty shit....rhyme scheme was nice..u held those multies while still making sense...good shit......def something worth bumping..jus minor lil things but it was still tight....stay up..........1


rtf:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210168

Damn I love this one, i like the beat. I also like the fact that you switched ya flow up a lot in this. your lyrics is fa sho on track and hittin hard. Damn as i listen to your tracks it gets hard to type feedback and shit its just like you spit so much its like all i need to say is this shit is hot and thats def word. Laso cause like your quality is perfect and delivery and all that shit is like mastered all you do different in ya new tracks from old is the change of the lyrics and the flow, and its always hittin hard even if the punchlines in ya disses aint up to show you still have that gangsta sound that just puts the cat mad down who ever your dissin. props to elevation man.

rtf: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209869

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i truely appreciate that feedback, but first off dont get me wrong i deserve negative feedback as well so i can know what are my flaws and what i needa work on... but feedback like that just makes a nigga wanna strive even harder for this...i put that on everythin i love if i ever get signed all yall gonna see from me is elevation and even more elevation i never stay the same way too long i adapt and establish myself amung others so yeah i appreciate that my nigga Ez p 1ne...

Return favor please...itd be appreciated.....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210373

I liek the beat alright. Something about it seems liek its' missing. Listening through some Audio Technica ATH-M40fs studio monitor headphones.

First verse: hmmm.. dunno what else to say but "dope" son. Shit's dead on and I LOVED the tempo switch. Def hot al lthe way through.

Hook: Hated it. Seems REAL simple. Like..TOO simple.


Second verse: hot, but I tihnk it shoulda switched up some sorta liek the first one did. This one seems a lil less 'alive' than the first one did. Also, I can hear you run completely outta breath by the end of the verse.

Oh yeah, the beat needs some EQing on the high and lows only to bring it out. the tones melt together way too much. Oh yeah, your echo duration was too long on the adlib at the end IMO.

Uno.

good looks on the feedback everyone i will rtf shortly im caught up on a couple of things so imma hit cha back up in bit Ez 1ne...