From Below The Bottom To Above The Top
 

Born and raised in a New York hood
I get on the mic and show y'all whats really good
Sometimes i can't take the shit
I can't wait to jus end it
Tryna get out this hood life, not deal with a cop
I'm goin from below the bottom to above the top

Im 13 and already 'bout to be a rapper don
Start shit,I'll come back straight,direct, and head on
My rhymes got you so amiss
You can't comprehend my diss
So give ya mother one last good-bye kiss
'Cause you fucked with me before and paybacks a bitch
I'd battle 24-7 if I could, I love the feeling of colliding
It's kinda funny that they can't handle the skills im providing
Hopin Hiface could help a homie hop out the hood
'Cause i want to be done wit that lifestyle for good
Hood hoppin and pistol poppin
it's atomic,these bombs that im droppin
I know you can't take it when my pistol pop
'Cause im goin from below the bottom to above the top

Born and raised in a New York hood
I get on the mic and show y'all whats really good
Sometimes i can't take the shit
I can't wait to jus end it
Tryna get out this hood life, not deal with a cop
I'm goin from below the bottom to above the top

Flow and structure isnt that great but it was something that just came to me,i just wrote,please gimme some feed,just let me know what you think of it and you can rate it if you want to...hit me bak

do u have any audio? this seems more of an audio thing...

it basically is an audio thing,but i dont have my mic yet so i couldnt put it in anything audio...but anyway,leave feed or rate it or w/e you feel like doin,just as long as you tell me what you think of it...hit me bak

well i like the 'below the bottom to above the top' concept,obviously the whole thing would be better in audio

I'd battle 24-7 if I could, I love the feeling of colliding
^that was my favourite line, any MC can identify wit it!

i'l be lookin out 4 ur audio-RTF plz, link in sig

nice.... , I had to sing it to catch the flow... its good..

anyway u gotta elevate ur vocab

loved the hook...

thanx mayne...uppin for more feed

uppin on this for more feed G's

Da Hook Was Coo'

I'd battle 24-7 if I could, I love the feeling of colliding
It's kinda funny that they can't handle the skills im providing

Dats My Fave Bar But Dis Was G'd Up Fo Sho Dog! Keep Doin Yo Thang.

iight mayne thanx alot for tha feed...uppin for more on this

its decent, you gotta elevate your vocab for this type of song then again it was stra8 so yea props, flow well, hook nice, good job 7.5/10

RTF and leave feed on my open mic call'ed: FUCK'EM the difference between us.....

thanx for tha feed G,yea ill RTF...uppin for more feed...c'mon people lemme know what ya think of my first open mic...and if ya get a chance please look at my other open mic called A Tragic Tale...hit me bak

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211396

^^ plez RTF of some feed cuz you havent yet whats good?

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