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10-11-05, 03:57 PM
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From Below The Bottom To Above The Top
IP: 3475 61F6
Born and raised in a New York hood
I get on the mic and show y'all whats really good Sometimes i can't take the shit I can't wait to jus end it Tryna get out this hood life, not deal with a cop I'm goin from below the bottom to above the top Im 13 and already 'bout to be a rapper don Start shit,I'll come back straight,direct, and head on My rhymes got you so amiss You can't comprehend my diss So give ya mother one last good-bye kiss 'Cause you fucked with me before and paybacks a bitch I'd battle 24-7 if I could, I love the feeling of colliding It's kinda funny that they can't handle the skills im providing Hopin Hiface could help a homie hop out the hood 'Cause i want to be done wit that lifestyle for good Hood hoppin and pistol poppin it's atomic,these bombs that im droppin I know you can't take it when my pistol pop 'Cause im goin from below the bottom to above the top Born and raised in a New York hood I get on the mic and show y'all whats really good Sometimes i can't take the shit I can't wait to jus end it Tryna get out this hood life, not deal with a cop I'm goin from below the bottom to above the top Flow and structure isnt that great but it was something that just came to me,i just wrote,please gimme some feed,just let me know what you think of it and you can rate it if you want to...hit me bak |
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10-11-05, 04:12 PM
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Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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IP: 042E 9E4C
do u have any audio? this seems more of an audio thing...
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This is my sig. what? I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =) I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks! |
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10-11-05, 04:18 PM
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IP: 3475 61F6
it basically is an audio thing,but i dont have my mic yet so i couldnt put it in anything audio...but anyway,leave feed or rate it or w/e you feel like doin,just as long as you tell me what you think of it...hit me bak
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10-11-05, 04:21 PM
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Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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IP: 042E 9E4C
well i like the 'below the bottom to above the top' concept,obviously the whole thing would be better in audio
I'd battle 24-7 if I could, I love the feeling of colliding ^that was my favourite line, any MC can identify wit it! i'l be lookin out 4 ur audio-RTF plz, link in sig
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This is my sig. what? I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =) I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks! |
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10-11-05, 04:34 PM
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B.I.G.
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IP: 7A88 4EE4
nice.... , I had to sing it to catch the flow... its good..
anyway u gotta elevate ur vocab loved the hook...
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10-11-05, 04:47 PM
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IP: 3475 61F6
thanx mayne...uppin for more feed
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10-12-05, 09:53 AM
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IP: BCFF BE8A
uppin on this for more feed G's
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10-12-05, 10:03 AM
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...::Nu-MoNeY::...
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IP: 2C35 F00F
Da Hook Was Coo'
I'd battle 24-7 if I could, I love the feeling of colliding It's kinda funny that they can't handle the skills im providing Dats My Fave Bar But Dis Was G'd Up Fo Sho Dog! Keep Doin Yo Thang.
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^^U Lil MotherFuckaz Aint Spittin Like Dis^^  |
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10-12-05, 10:06 AM
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IP: BCFF BE8A
iight mayne thanx alot for tha feed...uppin for more on this
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10-12-05, 02:58 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 21D9 C3FE
its decent, you gotta elevate your vocab for this type of song then again it was stra8 so yea props, flow well, hook nice, good job 7.5/10
RTF and leave feed on my open mic call'ed: FUCK'EM the difference between us..... |
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10-12-05, 03:34 PM
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IP: 3475 61F6
thanx for tha feed G,yea ill RTF...uppin for more feed...c'mon people lemme know what ya think of my first open mic...and if ya get a chance please look at my other open mic called A Tragic Tale...hit me bak
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10-12-05, 03:47 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 21D9 C3FE
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211396
^^ plez RTF of some feed cuz you havent yet whats good? |
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10-12-05, 06:48 PM
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IP: 3475 61F6
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10-12-05, 06:52 PM
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10-21-05, 10:11 AM
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.:Certified Mystique:.
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IP: BCFF BE8A
Upin For More Feed
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