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King Solo 10-13-05 02:45 PM

K.S. vs GKillaz05
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No Dickriding
Nu Bullshit

3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO

G'Luck :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 10-14-05 at 02:45 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.


Win by 3-0 KO

System 10-14-05 09:05 AM

K.S. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-05 09:05 AM.

System 10-14-05 09:18 AM

GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-05 09:18 AM.

GKillaz05 10-14-05 09:29 AM

Your rhymes are like food thats been sittin' out gettin old...
K.S. isnt bold if we were playin' poker this kid would fold...
Startin' to grow mold and it seems like you give a fuck-less...
Surprised you didnt duck this, K.S. will never know success...
It would be luck I guess if King came up wit one punchline...
Talk alot of shit, but cant spit one line come crunch time...
Fakes rhymes... and weak vocab is all King's rap possesses...
Dicks stuck up like dresses fallin aparts all he progresses...
Like an occupation, I should get paid to exterminate haterz...
Serve you like a waitor... RV - you can pay me for it later...

Quick 10mins drop - G'd Luck

King Solo 10-15-05 02:54 AM

fuck ure herb battling ass......ure forced structure and ure wack ass attempts at decent wordplay, muthafucka :shoot:

Killa of G’z…...kid I’ll merk ya ass, blast ya name to the floor
Cuz I’ll kill a letter with a killer letter, like postin’ anthrax thru ya door
I’m stuck for punches, I’ll just end ya performance like curtain calls
Cuz yo, I don’t know shit about shit,
…………so ya know I’m short on personals.
But congrats son!! U in a crew, but clearly u aint a picky chooser
Cuz I see u reppin’ The L…so at least u admit ure a loser!!
Spittin keystyles, no wonder headaches have got this G floored
Cuz his mom keeps bangin his head, for droolin’ on the keyboard
But yo, this kid is elevating, his skillz increase more and more
He’s leavin’ his Legacy……60 battles, each one wacker than before.


FUCK YOU!!! :gfy:

noname 10-15-05 11:15 AM

This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
 
checkin polls.....................................

Big_O 10-15-05 12:16 PM

This was feedback posted for K.S.
 
.................pollz............................ ....

King Solo 10-16-05 12:17 PM

vote fuckaz........................................

%%%% 10-16-05 12:29 PM

Voted For: K.S.

Your rhymes are like food thats been sittin' out gettin old...
K.S. isnt bold if we were playin' poker this kid would fold.
2....didn't like the 1st line...and card lines are getting played now.
Startin' to grow mold and it seems like you give a fuck-less...
Surprised you didnt duck this, K.S. will never know success...
4....ok diss,been used a lot tho.
It would be luck I guess if King came up wit one punchline...
Talk alot of shit, but cant spit one line come crunch time..
1...nah...seems like ur just babblin on.
Fakes rhymes... and weak vocab is all King's rap possesses...
Dicks stuck up like dresses fallin aparts all he progresses...
3...1st line is borderline fake personal...and punch was meh.
Like an occupation, I should get paid to exterminate haterz...
Serve you like a waitor... RV - you can pay me for it later.
3.....serve/waiter...played.

Killa of G’z…...kid I’ll merk ya ass, blast ya name to the floor
Cuz I’ll kill a letter with a killer letter, like postin’ anthrax thru ya door
3...nothing serious here,didn't hit as a punch.
I’m stuck for punches, I’ll just end ya performance like curtain calls
Cuz yo, I don’t know shit about shit,
…………so ya know I’m short on personals.
2....Didn't like this,if he was a newb...then OK.But he been here since early 2004,...and if ya don't know shit 'bout him..then research.
But congrats son!! U in a crew, but clearly u aint a picky chooser
Cuz I see u reppin’ The L…so at least u admit ure a loser!!
3...wtf..?..W/L lines are played now
Spittin keystyles, no wonder headaches have got this G floored
Cuz his mom keeps bangin his head, for droolin’ on the keyboard
4....ok punch.
But yo, this kid is elevating, his skillz increase more and more
He’s leavin’ his Legacy……60 battles, each one wacker than before.
6...good punch.

Ok..decent enuff battle here...
Gkillaz..
Try to avoid using the "perfect square" structure.That's played out.And u really need to get some better concepts for ur punches.Cause a lot of ur shit was played,.
Solo...
One of the weaker shit I've seen from you.Didn't like the short on personals line...considering that GKillz ain't a newb.And W/L lines are played...The last 2 bars of ur verse won this for u.


Vote-Solo
NK is my alias...so Drop a vote in the link below
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211483

Daubs 10-16-05 12:34 PM

Voted For: K.S.

Killa of G’z…...kid I’ll merk ya ass, blast ya name to the floor
Cuz I’ll kill a letter with a killer letter, like postin’ anthrax thru ya door
I’m stuck for punches, I’ll just end ya performance like curtain calls
Cuz yo, I don’t know shit about shit,
…………so ya know I’m short on personals.
But congrats son!! U in a crew, but clearly u aint a picky chooser
Cuz I see u reppin’ The L…so at least u admit ure a loser!!


VS


A bunch of statements, wtf at you having no punchlines/wordplay and rhytming progression with progression...

KS the only bad thing you did was use a bar with a played concept but flipped it so it was ight.

This is way one sided.

No hate

RTF in Sig please solooooooo

King Solo 10-16-05 12:47 PM

i got ya both covered......

and that short on personals line NK, he may have been here for a long time according to his join date, but he left for a hella long time, so in actual fact, he aint been here that long.

Dickard. 10-16-05 07:55 PM

Voted For: K.S.

K.S.-your verse was hystericall, idc who u are that shits funny :roll:, ok...your verse had mad personals and punches...all comical so u had me interested and laughing...nice job man...ur best line for me
Quote:
But congrats son!! U in a crew, but clearly u aint a picky chooser
Cuz I see u reppin’ The L…so at least u admit ure a loser!!

over all = 9/10

Gkilla-Your verse is ....hmmm where to start lol...you had good structure...thats about it yo......your punches werent really there...just talked how he wouldnt come hard in a battle...when he indeed did.....your best lines
Meh, NONE

overall-4/10

v/K.S.

rtf in a couple days wen a battle WILL be open 1

King Solo 10-16-05 11:02 PM

werd. its done....................................

Illist 10-17-05 03:09 AM

This was feedback posted for K.S.
 
Gkillaz
Your rhymes are like food thats been sittin' out gettin old...
K.S. isnt bold if we were playin' poker this kid would fold...
no punch really
Startin' to grow mold and it seems like you give a fuck-less...
Surprised you didnt duck this, K.S. will never know success...
punch?
It would be luck I guess if King came up wit one punchline...
Talk alot of shit, but cant spit one line come crunch time...
no punchline.. you dissin ya self?
Fakes rhymes... and weak vocab is all King's rap possesses...
Dicks stuck up like dresses fallin aparts all he progresses...
eh.
Like an occupation, I should get paid to exterminate haterz...
Serve you like a waitor... RV - you can pay me for it later...
best line i guess

You lacked punches, alot.. Try to use similes/meta's and try to use better vocab.. Keep droppin homie.

K.S.
Killa of G’z…...kid I’ll merk ya ass, blast ya name to the floor
Cuz I’ll kill a letter with a killer letter, like postin’ anthrax thru ya door
dope
I’m stuck for punches, I’ll just end ya performance like curtain calls
Cuz yo, I don’t know shit about shit,
…………so ya know I’m short on personals.
dopeness + witty
But congrats son!! U in a crew, but clearly u aint a picky chooser
Cuz I see u reppin’ The L…so at least u admit ure a loser!!
decent
Spittin keystyles, no wonder headaches have got this G floored
Cuz his mom keeps bangin his head, for droolin’ on the keyboard
ok
But yo, this kid is elevating, his skillz increase more and more
He’s leavin’ his Legacy……60 battles, each one wacker than before.
decent at best

Your verse was good. Full of humor and some dope punches throughout. Good job.

V/ K.S.

Return the favor- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211798

Keep droppin' homies


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