Life
this is sumtin quick tell me wat i need to work on
i been in this game for couple of years but still workin on makin music to people ears think u been iin more hard times than me try to fight these tears wen i got shot wit those nine's i though i was at peace but i neva gave up on rappin i always had a caprice i always feared the least but still had respect for homie's had no respect for snitches i would aim my nine and squeeze then a deal went bad kid didnt have the money and i was mad so i said ill take everything valuable away from u even ur mom and Dad So the kid got the money and paid me back but he heard his mom and dad was dead and he died of a fatal anxiety attack sometin quick and first open mic so help me out |
Drop two links or this will be closed
-Moved- |
|
I Like Ur Flow And Vocab, U Got A Way Wit Wordz, Jus Need 2 Turn Sum Of Ur Rhymes In5to Creative Punches Dawg
Pretty Decent Drop For Ur First Open Mic Im Feelin Ur Style, Jus Work On Punchlinez Dawg |
aight cool thanx anyone else wit feedbak..........
|
All times are GMT -4. The time now is 02:39 AM. |