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Talk_is_Cheap 10-16-05 02:01 AM

Life
 
this is sumtin quick tell me wat i need to work on

i been in this game for couple of years
but still workin on makin music to people ears
think u been iin more hard times than me try to fight these tears
wen i got shot wit those nine's i though i was at peace
but i neva gave up on rappin i always had a caprice
i always feared the least but still had respect for homie's
had no respect for snitches i would aim my nine and squeeze
then a deal went bad kid didnt have the money and i was mad
so i said ill take everything valuable away from u even ur mom and Dad
So the kid got the money and paid me back
but he heard his mom and dad was dead and he died of a fatal anxiety attack

sometin quick and first open mic so help me out

Kawn Flixx 10-16-05 02:27 AM

Drop two links or this will be closed

-Moved-

Talk_is_Cheap 10-16-05 12:51 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211686

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211686

Meta.Phor.T.Cal 10-16-05 01:19 PM

I Like Ur Flow And Vocab, U Got A Way Wit Wordz, Jus Need 2 Turn Sum Of Ur Rhymes In5to Creative Punches Dawg

Pretty Decent Drop For Ur First Open Mic Im Feelin Ur Style, Jus Work On Punchlinez Dawg

Talk_is_Cheap 10-16-05 01:31 PM

aight cool thanx anyone else wit feedbak..........


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