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10-16-05, 02:01 AM | #1 | |||||||
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IP: 0825 899A
this is sumtin quick tell me wat i need to work on
i been in this game for couple of years but still workin on makin music to people ears think u been iin more hard times than me try to fight these tears wen i got shot wit those nine's i though i was at peace but i neva gave up on rappin i always had a caprice i always feared the least but still had respect for homie's had no respect for snitches i would aim my nine and squeeze then a deal went bad kid didnt have the money and i was mad so i said ill take everything valuable away from u even ur mom and Dad So the kid got the money and paid me back but he heard his mom and dad was dead and he died of a fatal anxiety attack sometin quick and first open mic so help me out |
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10-16-05, 02:27 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 31C2 62EB
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10-16-05, 12:51 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
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10-16-05, 01:19 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 3460 8573
I Like Ur Flow And Vocab, U Got A Way Wit Wordz, Jus Need 2 Turn Sum Of Ur Rhymes In5to Creative Punches Dawg
Pretty Decent Drop For Ur First Open Mic Im Feelin Ur Style, Jus Work On Punchlinez Dawg
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10-16-05, 01:31 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 0825 899A
aight cool thanx anyone else wit feedbak..........
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