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Diligence (0-1) vs. E.C (1-2)
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This battle will be EZ`, it's hard not to be confident
Shit, I dont need censorship to take out Explicit Content |
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even if ive got writers block i can snipe shots that drop you,
and no i'm not talking about the zits on your face... ........when i say i want to pop you, g'luck |
Dilligence - Basically wasted his first line on self-glorifying about how easy it will be to beat E.C and that hes so confident. Second line was also wasted by stating how hes gunna "take out" E.C. You actually gotta throw a punch dawg. Pretend like its the 70's and start swingin.
E.C - First line was another waste of time cause it wasnt hitting your opponent. I can see how you wanted to use it to play your second line off it but it wasnt the greatest setup to do so. Second line was played, zit-popping/gun concepts are commonly used now. Plus if your gunna use a 3-line structure like that be careful. At least you actually threw a bit of a punch tho. V/E.C..................... |
its a habbit doing the 3 line bar's i think they are more interesting but thatnks for ya vote man...
uppin |
vote: E.C
diligence ya first line was good then when u attempted ah punch, tha wording fucked it up...made it sound so-so, and it lost its effect even tho it was nameplay |
even if ive got writers block i can snipe shots that drop you,
and no i'm not talking about the zits on your face... ........when i say i want to pop you, Wuzn't feelin 1st line...bassically one of 'em "I could come weak and still own" lines.And being as I post a lot in the cypher,I see that A LOT.And it is annoying for writtens. And the punch..?...PLAYED.I seen shit about zit/pop from ever since.Hell,i even heard Dr.Dre use one in the chronic album.That's how played it is. This battle will be EZ`, it's hard not to be confident Shit, I dont need censorship to take out Explicit Content ur 1st line sucked..same problem as E.C. And the punch is played............but so was E.C's.... BUT..all in all...I got to give it to Diligence for comin wit a less played line that wuz a personal... v/diligence... Weak battle.. |
cheers for the honesty man.....
2-1 me.. |
v/ EC
dilligence, that nameplays been done too much already EC popped pimples is too simple no rhyme intended :) |
This battle will be EZ`, it's hard not to be confident
Shit, I dont need censorship to take out Explicit Content yup short and sweet nicely done got to the point, E.C ya punch is played the hell out, |
if u been here long enoygh you'd realise his was more played than mine....
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E.C wins.
Diligence loses. |
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