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Magic5 10-17-05 02:22 AM

DaTrusHurtz (1-0) vs. DoContinue (1-0)
 


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DoContinue 10-17-05 05:16 AM

ooh ... we get our own little sub in here.... whooopie!!!
check baby... how about two lines each?

DaTrusHurtz 10-17-05 12:14 PM

hmmmm, why sure, two lines sounds fine

DaTrusHurtz 10-21-05 03:06 PM

You won't ever be a threat to me so get away ya homo
I mean your idea of Martial Arts is a big Eminem photo

DoContinue 10-21-05 09:55 PM

cant handle datruth? i wont give you a chance to improve
cuz style is craps, so roll on, wit me you just gamblin dude...

noname 10-21-05 10:07 PM

You won't ever be a threat to me so get away ya homo
I mean your idea of Martial Arts is a big Eminem photo

LoL...I been thinking of using a line like this in the past,just never used it...anyways...

Photo is a picture..that comes out of a camera..
If you said Emimem Drawing.....then it would have been better.Becuz a drawing is art,photo is not.So...you dropped the ball in wording it..

cant handle datruth? i wont give you a chance to improve
cuz style is craps, so roll on, wit me you just gamblin dude...

^^Wtf is this?...Honestly,this was too weak.Like the rhymin...but ur content was shit.

SO,DTH fucked his concept up with wording it..but Doc dropped garbage.
If he dropped something decent,then he would have got this easy.

V/Datrushurtz

DoContinue 10-21-05 11:15 PM

i dont think u understood it... bc you wouldnt have said wtf is this... i could see if u didnt like it tho... but do u get the wordplay? craps (dice game...) roll on... chance, gamble... nuff said

Defined 10-21-05 11:33 PM

v/ DTH not great from either but his had a better concept and was overall better in my opinion

Theory 10-22-05 01:18 AM

Your line was weak DC, work on your.........WORDING, your like most cats, good concepts, but they can't word their concepts. You know? Well, I gtg with

v/DTH

King Solo 10-22-05 10:00 AM

Voted for DaTrusHurtz

DTH, lol I liked the concept and regardless of what NK says, "Photo's ARE considered a type of Art". The wordplay was nice and overall the punch itself had the element of humour in it to. :thumbup:

DoContinue, "Da truth" nameplays on DTH are played to fuck. The wordplay in the second line was nice with the "craps/chance/gambling" concept, but that was the only plus to the bar. The punch in itself was average and it wasn't really funny, that is why DTH's appealed more to me.

V/ - DaTrusHurtz

Vaskez 10-22-05 11:43 AM

You won't ever be a threat to me so get away ya homo
I mean your idea of Martial Arts is a big Eminem photo
^^corny as hell but wordplay works and is quite funny

vs.

cant handle datruth? i wont give you a chance to improve
cuz style is craps, so roll on, wit me you just gamblin dude...
^^ok wordplay, no real punch to it

v/DTH

Diet Coke 10-22-05 12:49 PM

Hahaha, I laughed pretty hard at DTH's punch..

Vote: DaTrusHurtz

Adam 10-22-05 12:50 PM

^ Yeah, that's me by the why. Forgot I was on that name.

N.Tavarez 10-22-05 02:58 PM

v/ truth good enuff to win

icy-hot 10-22-05 03:35 PM

You won't ever be a threat to me so get away ya homo
I mean your idea of Martial Arts is a big Eminem photo

this wasnt even that good and sadly the best punch in this battle


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