Legend vs Satans Spawn
Battle Rules: 6 -8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 Ko 4-1 ko * The Person With The Most Votes After: (1). Either Way of Ko (2). 15 Days Automatically Wins The Battle And The 50 Post That Was bided Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-17-05 at 07:32 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
Satans Spawn has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 05:38 PM.
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Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 05:43 PM.
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You Gonna Be Catchin AIDS If You keep Hangin Round my Sickness Im Knockin The Weight Off Your Ass Worste Than Physical Fitness You Winning This Battle Is Lightly Expected Like Opra Dating Women Your Never Gonna Finish Me Off Yo Ass Barely Got To The Begining Im Comin To Steal Kill And Destroy..Bitch I Live to My Dads Mission And You'll Never Come Big To Win ..So Its Like Your Dick Is Missing -Finish- If You Dont Get The Punchez / Personals Dont Vote. |
satans whackest spawn is what your were made to be
votes will go lower than the aftermath of the first spawn movie nigga sold his soul so he can be a rhyming sensation girl wanted him to sell his soul so his sperm can spawn during ejaculation go out and get a fucking life just like your momma did and go make mistakes like yo momma did having you kid kidaint got no soul but think hot wit his lyrical churning even if you was hanging wit the demon himself you still wont be burning |
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Voted For: Satans Spawn
Satans Spawn You Gonna Be Catchin AIDS If You keep Hangin Round my Sickness Im Knockin The Weight Off Your Ass Worste Than Physical Fitness Ehh.. Decent.. You Winning This Battle Is Lightly Expected Like Opra Dating Women Your Never Gonna Finish Me Off Yo Ass Barely Got To The Begining Not worded into a punch.. Im Comin To Steal Kill And Destroy..Bitch I Live to My Dads Mission And You'll Never Come Big To Win ..So Its Like Your Dick Is Missing Nah.. Legend satans whackest spawn is what your were made to be votes will go lower than the aftermath of the first spawn movie Nah.. nigga sold his soul so he can be a rhyming sensation girl wanted him to sell his soul so his sperm can spawn during ejaculation No way.. Didn't connect.. go out and get a fucking life just like your momma did and go make mistakes like yo momma did having you kid Played to shit.. kidaint got no soul but think hot wit his lyrical churning even if you was hanging wit the demon himself you still wont be burning Ehh.. Not very good at all.. Overall, I have to go give this to Satans Spawn. That "weight off your ass" line was pretty decent.. everything else was either worded wrong or just not good. Whereas, Legend's whole verse was either not worded good, played, or just not good, period. So, when it comes down to it, Satans Spawn's 1 good line was enough to win it for him. Vote - Satans Spawn Legend, sign up for the Punchline League.. you'll elevate pretty fast there. It's a good opportunity for you to battle without messing up your record. |
This was feedback posted for Satans Spawn
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Voted For: Satans Spawn
this was a pretty weak battle imo legend.. sorry to say you aint no legend.. your punches barely connected and i lost count of how many times u saud soul in your verse. it wasnt the worst verse ive seen but it was pretty bad... up your vocab, and use better concepts for your punches also work on wording them satans: pretty weak verse also, you did win but your punches were pretty played.. i know u got it easy but it still dont matter if u go hard it only makes u feel better anywayz work on your wording and set up lines v/ satans spawn keep elevating |
Thanx EC
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Voted For: Satans Spawn
Satans Spawn Verse You Gonna Be Catchin AIDS If You keep Hangin Round my Sickness Im Knockin The Weight Off Your Ass Worste Than Physical Fitness ^ blah not feelin it 1st line played and 2nd line self glorified You Winning This Battle Is Lightly Expected Like Opra Dating Women Your Never Gonna Finish Me Off Yo Ass Barely Got To The Begining ^ hmm ok but not really strong i seen a lot better Im Comin To Steal Kill And Destroy..Bitch I Live to My Dads Mission And You'll Never Come Big To Win ..So Its Like Your Dick Is Missing ^ hmm ok closer the my dads mission bit i ain't really get but was ok Overall Average at best flow and structure text wise are aight but nothing amazing stood out plus it was only 6 lines...i'd expect something raw seeing as much wasn't needed to write Legend Verse satans whackest spawn is what your were made to be votes will go lower than the aftermath of the first spawn movie ^ hmm flip on the name but coulda been a lot better nigga sold his soul so he can be a rhyming sensation girl wanted him to sell his soul so his sperm can spawn during ejaculation ^ blah not feelin fake personal and not a very decent bar go out and get a fucking life just like your momma did and go make mistakes like yo momma did having you kid ^ momma disses...omg...na...not feelin sorry kidaint got no soul but think hot wit his lyrical churning even if you was hanging wit the demon himself you still wont be burning ^ closer average...nothing amazing though Overall Ya verse was basic...rhyming was basic layout was not all over the place but wording could of been better to assist the layout...i wasn't feelin the bars as much as S.S's to be honest he had average disses...and your's (8 lines) nothing to me made me go ohhhh ya feel me...keep at it though you'll improve as time goes on :thumbup: Vote: Satans Spawn... |
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..................And thats 3-0 KO and 50 Post added to my post count |
Voted For: Satans Spawn
V/ Spawn Reason- I thought legend had a not so dope verse.. I didnt feel his punches hit hard, and the complexity just wasnt there. I thought Spawn's verse was decent with a couple good punches, the first bar won it.. Werd. RTF- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211798 |
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