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Keepin' It Real. Word
My bars be hot in, number 1 spot n I'm hardly stoppin... You too late like puttin Slim Fast in Chris Farley's coffin... I spit hot sick flows, let alone my fuckin glock rips foes... Killin off every one of your dogs, I'll even pop Wishbone... My fried mind's intact, but I still do drive-bys wit gats... And I'ma keep on droppin Heat like a skydiving Shack... I erase great thugs, so try stoppin this freight train son... End up royaly fucked like the Queen on date rape drugs... Step up n try your luck, I'ma keep gettin high as fuck... Ridin wit da boys in red, and they don't drive fire trucks... So bitch pick ya weapon, I choose my smith n wesson... And I ain't cuttin ya food, but I'll have ya ribs in sections... Puttin bodies in gutters, ya'll keep robbing eachother... I tend to be impacting boards, n I'm no karate instructor... Ya'll play the game n fail, some place my name in brail... These the type of bars that keep Saddam Hussein in jail... |
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Curious as to why you did this in a white font? but w/e
its decent key.........thas bout all i can say i really mostly give feed to open mics and topicals this looks like it belongs in freestyle section or something........ RTF on the OMs in my sig |
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im lovin tha multies mang. dope shit. u do audio? werd
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It's nothin special, not enough punch lines to keep me intrested, just same old shit, and the white font makes it hard to see.
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yeah dont do that white joint again. work on ya punches bcuz some of them just werent workin. your flow is ok and you have some decent rhymin skills. all i would say is work on puttin your joints together a lil better, bcuz this was just kinda random. keep doin ya thing....1....
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pieace was dope, smooth flow, technically sound..what's more to say, nice punches here and there...
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