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Old 10-20-05, 05:09 AM   #1
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My bars be hot in, number 1 spot n I'm hardly stoppin...
You too late like puttin Slim Fast in Chris Farley's coffin...
I spit hot sick flows, let alone my fuckin glock rips foes...
Killin off every one of your dogs, I'll even pop Wishbone...
My fried mind's intact, but I still do drive-bys wit gats...
And I'ma keep on droppin Heat like a skydiving Shack...
I erase great thugs, so try stoppin this freight train son...
End up royaly fucked like the Queen on date rape drugs...
Step up n try your luck, I'ma keep gettin high as fuck...
Ridin wit da boys in red, and they don't drive fire trucks...
So bitch pick ya weapon, I choose my smith n wesson...
And I ain't cuttin ya food, but I'll have ya ribs in sections...
Puttin bodies in gutters, ya'll keep robbing eachother...
I tend to be impacting boards, n I'm no karate instructor...
Ya'll play the game n fail, some place my name in brail...
These the type of bars that keep Saddam Hussein in jail...

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Old 10-20-05, 05:11 AM   #2
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Old 10-20-05, 09:09 AM   #3
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Curious as to why you did this in a white font? but w/e

its decent key.........thas bout all i can say i really mostly give feed to open mics and topicals this looks like it belongs in freestyle section or something........

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Old 10-25-05, 10:10 PM   #4
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BUMP BUMP BUMP ...

feed me.
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Old 11-05-05, 09:32 PM   #5
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Bump . > . <

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Old 11-06-05, 05:04 AM   #6
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im lovin tha multies mang. dope shit. u do audio? werd
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Old 11-06-05, 02:41 PM   #7
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It's nothin special, not enough punch lines to keep me intrested, just same old shit, and the white font makes it hard to see.
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Old 11-07-05, 12:06 PM   #8
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yeah dont do that white joint again. work on ya punches bcuz some of them just werent workin. your flow is ok and you have some decent rhymin skills. all i would say is work on puttin your joints together a lil better, bcuz this was just kinda random. keep doin ya thing....1....
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Old 11-12-05, 11:39 AM   #9
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Feedback please......
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Old 11-12-05, 12:53 PM   #10
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pieace was dope, smooth flow, technically sound..what's more to say, nice punches here and there...
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