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15. Natural Killa vs. 16. Fraud
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yea good luck check-in........
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http://community.rapverse.com/showp...4&postcount=326
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rhyming right with right says clearly says that ya skills won't head far & day you get respect is the same day u tell me wat appouch and treads are .. . .. . hurry up and post early fraud |
On this 'board im the king' U'll die by the 'sword that i bring'
NK couldnt 'script a great battle' if you wrote 'lord of the rings'..... that should do it |
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rhyming right with right says clearly says that ya skills won't head far
& day you get respect is the same day u tell me wat appouch and treads are ^^lol kinda poorly executed but a personal is always good On this 'board im the king' U'll die by the 'sword that i bring' NK couldnt 'script a great battle' if you wrote 'lord of the rings' ^^nah, opposite problem to the above. What you wanted to say, you said it well but the whole idea was kinda messed up. I mean why would he want to script a great battle, he doesnt want the whole battle to be great, just his verse, lol. So kinda irrelevant IMO, not a harsh diss. The personal wins v/NK |
V// fraud and NK both lose.
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V/Fraud...
NK's was too poorly worded/extended... |
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v/fraud....mainly because NK's was very plain, and went to too many lengths to get just 2 lines....and personally i thought it was lacking a lil
frauds was basic, but i think he edged it, try harder next week. |
v/fraud... hit harder... and damn my space bar is fucked up
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vote fraud his was better
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vote NK
mainly cuz his was atleast an attempted personal, frauds was more on the cliche side and wasnt very hard hitting NK's coulda been worded better, then it woulda been heaps better but yeah v/ NK |
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V/ 9th... at least it rhymed... lmfao.... *get it, bc it doesnt rhyme..* |
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