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L.E 10-27-05 06:07 PM

"I Forgive You"...A nice chilling track...
 
www.soundclick.com/limitededitioncan

Yup...another track...I actually got amazing quality form my PS2 mic this time! Very little hiss.

Peep it and will return the favor.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212786
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212670

theblob 10-27-05 06:38 PM

ur flow was very controlled...I liked the tone of the track

and the beat was appropriate for your lyrics

delivery was good...but could have been more expressive with the voice


lyrics are good


I like this track


**Appreciate the shout out too



7.5/10

Mister Mischief 10-27-05 07:31 PM

Nice layedback beat....good wit yo voice.......nice delivery.....lil off beat at times but still good....overall good track 7/10

PrahJect 10-27-05 07:50 PM

IIGh dawg peepin this now..im feelin the beat..u make it??...

feelin the strings in this beat....im feelin what u sayin...loove this beat

voice suits this beat...much better quality...lyrics are nice..actually very very very nice...nice delivery...im lovin the hook...presence cud be upped a lil...but I love this quite a bit...im gonna download this...AY was that my name??...YAY i like this track now...like that american line...lyrics are like woah...LOL at the k-trini line...this is dope...liked that "hes not, shes not"...lol at the penis lane...this is dope 9/10

Paranoid 10-27-05 08:36 PM

damn! I can till you made this beat fa sho. the beat is actually pretty good, props to the beat makin. The flow you have is very consistant and nice, with a good emotion and delivery fa sho. the hook is very good and on point. but overall I enjoed this...keep it up

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L.E 10-27-05 09:08 PM

A'ight thanks to all...

Uppin' I will return the favor...

TitoBronsky 10-28-05 12:23 AM

you made this beat??? its dope!

flow is on point over this shit.. delievery is definetly elevated... got me bumpin to this...

got my vote for featered this week word



LMAO @ the outro.... "delivery sucks , Fuck RV ...etc.." that shit was golden

niggas is gonna stop sleepin on you kid :)



'respect'

Mad Dog 10-28-05 04:13 AM

flows good...beats nice if you made it then :thumbup:

You got the PS2 mic on lock i agree coz this shit quality wise sounds real nice...ya flow is good kinda basic a lil...but you hold it down lyrically :thumbup:

keep droppin fam

Districk 10-28-05 12:26 PM

This song was dope...beat wuz mad nice too...

Jay Royal 10-28-05 12:48 PM

ou shit...this is hot........

are u sure u r not eminem?

u sound just like eminem....but back to song...

beat is dope
flow is nice, that goes nicely with beat, I liked
hook was ok but not that gd like other parts of song
outro is fucking great...
this was something hot shit right there...keep this up

L.E 10-28-05 01:33 PM

Word...

Thanks to all...and no I'm not Eminem hahaha...

If ya'll got any links, hit me up! :thumbup:

Uppin'...

DQ 10-28-05 02:43 PM

First things first, I'm feeling the beat, can be used in different ways for sure. You managed to flow in a sort of unique way but it suited the beat perfectly. The lyrics are on point, got some deep shit going on in there. Presence might have been slightly better though, you kept it real chill but I wanted some more power in your voice here and there. Hook is nice add-on to the song. I'm feeling your voice...it's nice...

Only bad thing...you didn't mention me :( Nah it's all good, nice shit man

L.E 10-28-05 04:55 PM

Yup yup...uppity up...

L.E 10-29-05 03:34 AM

Upp..............

Willa 10-30-05 09:51 PM

liking the ebat if you made thsi its your best beat ive heard on the real fits ur lyrics and delivery well
flow was much more on point so props on this good job you could flow different speeds on thsi track
emotion pretty decent
lol truth production muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuch better lol
props on this overall elevaztion especially with the beat
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