Black Dragon - End Is Near
 

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End is Near (Hi-Fi)
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'preciate any feedback..................

Feelin the beat....in you come...flow is str8...hook is pretty nice...like the slow...woahh u come with the fast shit...but its soo off flow tho...now its slow...its much better like that...lyrics are str8....slow flow is nicer than ure fast shit..quality is aiigh...lol at u dissin paul wall...i dont lke him..iigh shit..u elevatin fam...6/10

uppin.....................................

I heard this beat on S/C...liked it


ur flow/delivery seem lackluster on it though

fast paced flow seemed like you were struggling...wasn't feelin it...


ur effort was better than the end result..work on making ur delivery more exciting





stay up and RTF on my "Make that difference" track



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'precaite feed....yea i'll keep ur words in mind............

uppin.....................

hot beat
koo that u can do fast shit like that, but u shud prolly perfect it be4 u do it on a track, sounds like ur outta breath at the end... slow flow is a lot better
lol @ u dissin all them mainstream rappers, disses were ok tho
overall 6.5/10

awww naww....

killin it w the violin !!

come in ok,need more emotion at 1st..wow,picks up big time...man am i feelin' this beat !!
tight track man

RTF plz..
jus hit up my most recent..will b in the top 20 somewere

'preciate feedback.........and Cho i got ya...........

Typing as I listen.....beat is ah'ight.......ok ya open ah'ight...lacked any real energy...oh what happens after beat drops?...u lost ya flow man...that fast flow sounded forced...an unnatural....ok back to the slow flow....it would be good if u put sum emotion in it....rhyme scheme was real basic....as was flow....it seemed like u used same scheme jus at diff speeds....if u upped ya energy an flowed more versatile this woulda been ill......but keep elevating....stay up.......1

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