RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > New Release Songs
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 10-29-05, 05:34 PM   #1
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
Posts: 7,092
Joined: Aug 2004
From: Chitown
Status: Offline
RG Round 0 track

IP: 6369 035F

I just messed around on this track, and i decided to ride the beat alil slower...... its been a while since ive done audio cuz my soundcard broke... so tell me wat ya think... i gave feed to ike and titos RG tracks, too

http://www.soundclick.com/olascript...utmynamesgalant


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2515097 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2515094
__________________

...The real Renegade before Hova...
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-29-05, 10:50 PM   #2
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
Posts: 7,092
Joined: Aug 2004
From: Chitown
Status: Offline
IP: 6369 035F

yall are faggots
__________________

...The real Renegade before Hova...
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-29-05, 11:27 PM   #3
theblob
Middle Weight
 
theblob's Avatar
 
Posts: 593
Joined: Oct 2005
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 1ADC A69C

again...love this beat


I don't like how u decided to flow on this beat...wudda sounded betta with a fast paced flow...either that or way more multis


but ur flow is at least on beat

decent at best
__________________
I'm Talented.Period.
Five Source Ent.
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-30-05, 10:37 AM   #4
Black Dragon
~Spitten Fire~
 
Black Dragon's Avatar
 
Posts: 570
Joined: Jul 2004
From: Charlotte, NC
Status: Offline
IP: B31E 3028

the beat is sick.........ya flow is strate even thoe it's a lil slow.......yo quality could be upped...so it'd be tyte when ya get ya soundcard fixed.........

overall the lyrics were strate........"Imma Psycho, Pyro...I blaze a lighter"........

aiite man....

pz

~1~
__________________
Send a message via AIM to Black Dragon   Reply With Quote
Old 10-30-05, 09:29 PM   #5
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
Willa's Avatar
 
Posts: 5,114
Joined: Feb 2004
Status: Offline
Audio Record: 1-0
IP: BF56 CF93

beat its cool lol one of the better ones out of the 6
flow slow i would have liked to hear you flow faster but you were trying somethin new so im not going to knock it it wasnt all that bad really jsut try to use more multis
production not great but with the exception of like 4 ppl on here no ones is good so i dont really care lol
nice to see you back
for stats
__________________



O.Y.D.
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-31-05, 09:28 AM   #6
DQ
Odi et Amo
 
DQ's Avatar
 
Posts: 3,675
Joined: Feb 2004
From: Alosta City
Status: Offline
IP: C11A 6193

I'm liking the beat without a doubt...

Is it just me or are your vocals hella loud? And your voice has an annoying tone to it on some sounds, sometimes I'm liking it and then when you say a certain word I don't...it's weird but not necessarily bad though. The lyrics are pretty funny haha...airbrushed T to match Fiya's tits...lolz...funny shit. Lyrics kept the overall track quite interesting. Flow might have been bit faster but it was on beat so no big deal actually.

Keep it up man...(feedback to learn rankings in RG)
__________________


Authentik Intelligence





...The future is mine...

Send a message via AIM to DQ Send a message via MSN to DQ Send a message via Yahoo to DQ   Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 12:19 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.