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Magic5 11-13-05 11:05 PM

23. Macca vs. 24. Daubs
 


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Macca 11-14-05 02:35 AM

yes... checking in. g'luck.

Daubs 11-14-05 01:58 PM

All the mouth you been giving,

lets see what happens.

G'luck.

Daubs 11-16-05 12:39 PM

I kill the small frys off first, but then just tackle the bigger
even eating healthy wont help you...when apple the trigger

meh.

drop soon

Macca 11-16-05 09:00 PM

Ur punches are as effective as DARE keeping kids of drugs
Like ALWAYS when you suck...... you highlight and cut

there. and if you don't get the punches I feel sorry for you.
start voting.

Enygma 11-16-05 09:28 PM

Vote - Daubs

.....Macca's didn't even really rhyme :rolleyes:

Macca 11-16-05 09:31 PM

well good job daubs. you got the first vote. :thumbup:

Defined 11-16-05 09:35 PM

v/daubs as well....cuz macca yours really didnt rhyme

MexicanGuy89 11-16-05 09:41 PM

The two guys that posted above me explained very well

V/Daubs

Macca 11-16-05 09:43 PM

omg. it just didn't rhyme. why don;t you tell daubs what quality he had in his bar. jeez. doesn't rhyme is fucking stupid.

Defined 11-16-05 09:47 PM

well we dont have to cuz someone coulda dropped this

your a pice of shit
ill win with one hit

cuz it rhymed this is text....and its a single punch....if it doesnt rhyme it defeats the purpose

~Luciano~ 11-17-05 03:30 AM

Both were Garbage

But ima go wit Daubs on this 1

King Solo 11-17-05 03:31 AM

V/ - Daubs

Daubs bar was pretty weak, he had a played concept he worked with and forced his wordplay in the second line with the "apple" part.
Macca, also very weak bar, forced the wordplay, there is no need to capitalise parts of your bars, and also it did rhyme, but not that well, that was the main reason why your bar was so weak, the concept was also played to.

Jae K.ing 11-17-05 06:10 AM

Daubs Got this both was weak both shoulda came harder sall good though...

Vote-Daubs

noname 11-17-05 07:57 AM

V/daubs.........


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