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..Grillz.. 11-14-05 01:52 PM

NotoriousM vs Street Disciple
 
Battle Rules:

8 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-15-05 at 01:52 AM

Must drop verse in 3000 minutes after check in.

System 11-14-05 01:53 PM

NotoriousM has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-05 01:53 PM.

System 11-14-05 01:54 PM

Street Disciple has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-05 01:54 PM.

Street Disciple 11-14-05 02:33 PM

Face it nigga, you ain't gotta flow, so just quit tryin to rap
Chances of you beatin me?Ha, like a nigga wit no ass takin a crap
Cus rhyme scheme is just like scarface, shits just played out and old
And ya wouldn't be spittin 'sick' even if you were rhymin with a cold
Notorious?You in the wrong place, like a cracker in black wall street
Scared, Couldn't start 'beef' even if he had a grill and some raw meet
You got no street cred, notorious my ass, nigga it's all inside of ya head
Know nothin bout the streets, got chased by a postman, claimed he was a fed
This nigg couldn't spit hot flows even if this nigga swallowed a lighter
Battlin me put you in the spotlight, no one notices cus you like u a ghost writer

Street Disciple 11-14-05 02:35 PM

Face it nigga, you ain't gotta flow, so just quit tryin to rap
Chances of you beatin me?Ha, like a nigga wit no ass takin a crap
Cus rhyme scheme is just like scarface, shits just played out and old
And ya wouldn't be spittin 'sick' even if you were rhymin with a cold
Notorious?You in the wrong place, like a cracker in black wall street
Scared, Couldn't start 'beef' even if he had a grill and some raw meat
You got no street cred, notorious my ass, nigga it's all inside of ya head
Know nothin bout the streets, got chased by a postman, claimed he was a fed
This nigg couldn't spit hot flows even if this nigga swallowed a lighter
Battlin me put you in the spotlight, no one notices cus you like u a ghost writer

Spellin Error:I spelled meat meet, edited it, if anything needs to be explained, just pm me.

Street Disciple 11-14-05 02:39 PM

Face it nigga, you ain't gotta flow, so just quit tryin to rap
Chances of you beatin me?Ha, like a nigga wit no ass takin a crap
Cus ya rhyme scheme is just like scarface, shits just played out and old
And ya wouldn't be spittin 'sick' even if you were rhymin with a cold
Notorious?You in the wrong place, like a cracker in black wall street
Scared, Couldn't start 'beef' even if he had a grill and some raw meat
You got no street cred, notorious my ass, nigga it's all inside of ya head
Know nothin bout the streets, got chased by a postman, claimed he was a fed
This nigg couldn't spit hot flows even if this nigga swallowed a lighter
Battlin me put you in the spotlight, no one notices cus you like u a ghost writer

Explain:The postmen I see where blueish type shit, like a cop, a fed is a cop with the gov, so he know nothin bout the streets and miexed the two up, no one notices him like he a ghost writer, ghosts can't be seen, so it's like his shit is neva gonna be nuthin special, no one notices it, or pays attention to it, black wall street was made by the game I think, but that was supposed to be literall...

..Grillz.. 11-14-05 02:42 PM

Ima rip this fool, Motha fuckaz only thirteen...
Don't make rap your career, You'll neva make any Green...
Ima rip through your spleen, Pull out your vocal chords...
I'm like a Docter, When I go through you with this sword...
Nurse, get out the scalpel, I'm about to Operate...
Beaten pretty bad, Gonna have to amputate...
Can't Tolerate, None of your weak ass rhymes...
Get Outta the 90's brah, Get with modern times...
Jesus will live a Hundred lives, Still you ain't no disciple...
Can't rap or flow, Kid like Shaq shootin' free throws...

Street Disciple 11-14-05 02:44 PM

Uppin this shit fo veres also T-dot made a thread to battle against you, ya might wanna check it out.....

T-Dot 11-14-05 02:51 PM

Voted For: NotoriousM

NotoriousM:
Ima rip this fool, Motha fuckaz only thirteen...
Don't make rap your career, You'll neva make any Green...
Ok Punch - 3/10
Ima rip through your spleen, Pull out your vocal chords...
I'm like a Docter, When I go through you with this sword...
MEH - 2/10
Nurse, get out the scalpel, I'm about to Operate...
Beaten pretty bad, Gonna have to amputate...
OK - 2/10
Can't Tolerate, None of your weak ass rhymes...
Get Outta the 90's brah, Get with modern times...
OK - 3/10
Jesus will live a Hundred lives, Still you ain't no disciple...
Can't rap or flow, Kid like Shaq shootin' free throws...
Good Punch - 3/10
13/50

You had an ok punch. and the flow was ok.

Street Disciple:
Face it nigga, you ain't gotta flow, so just quit tryin to rap
Chances of you beatin me?Ha, like a nigga wit no ass takin a crap
GAY - 1/10
Cus rhyme scheme is just like scarface, shits just played out and old
And ya wouldn't be spittin 'sick' even if you were rhymin with a cold
MEH - 2/10
Notorious?You in the wrong place, like a cracker in black wall street
Scared, Couldn't start 'beef' even if he had a grill and some raw meet
MEH - 2/10
You got no street cred, notorious my ass, nigga it's all inside of ya head
Know nothin bout the streets, got chased by a postman, claimed he was a fed
FAKE - 1//10
This nigg couldn't spit hot flows even if this nigga swallowed a lighter
Battlin me put you in the spotlight, no one notices cus you like u a ghost writer
SO?..1/10
7/10

You need to work on shit kid, hope you spit better for our battle. Work on punches.

Vote - Notorious M

Street Disciple 11-14-05 02:56 PM

Na nigga fuck outta my battle with them hate votes, and you wanna talk bout my shit nigga?

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175372

I'd fuckin merk the shit outta stop talkin shit you lil bitch, dont get mad cus you garbage at rhymin, fuckin make that battle so I can merk the shit outta ya bitch ass...

Street Disciple 11-15-05 05:44 PM

Uppin............................................. ............................

..Grillz.. 11-22-05 12:33 PM

Uppin............................................. .........

..Grillz.. 11-22-05 01:16 PM

Uppin............................need some votes...

Poetics 11-22-05 07:54 PM

Voted For: Street Disciple

voted 4 Street D...u flowed better..punches were more thought out, much more thorough..good double rymes....Notorious had a good ending...not as good though as Street's overall drop...

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Best Lines:

Street D:
You got no street cred, notorious my ass, nigga it's all inside of ya head
Know nothin bout the streets, got chased by a postman, claimed he was a fed
(G'ya)


Notorious:
Can't Tolerate, None of your weak ass rhymes...
Get Outta the 90's brah, Get with modern times..
(best one i found...i didnt like any of the doctor, nurse, operation shit)

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RTV, Honestly

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..Grillz.. 11-24-05 02:27 PM

uppin........................................need some votes........


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