Strange Fruit
 

The taste of bein hopeful while feeling hoplessness
Understandable motions but confused motionless
Strong ideas thought up while weak minded
Anger gets fast forward and happiness is rewinded
Feeling without a purpose while finding destiny
Poetry spokin out loud but what your writing never speaks
Vivid lines get written on lines invisible
Realizing the impossible prayin for miracles
Kisses are tender soft moments become bitter hard times
You think the love is permanent turns out its part time
You believe in god while the devil is workin 24/7
"What a hell of a life" you say... no wonder your searchin for heaven
Believin bullshit opinions instead of learning the facts
look in the mirror and your reflection's turning its back
Bitter sweetness of joy grown from derranged roots
Struggles become celebrated while bitten from Strange Fruit
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come on ppl........uppin dis shit...............damn dont sleep on dis

this was actually really good.your imagery couldve been shown a little better here by maybe expanding more on the topic a little.............but your imagery was still very good.vocab and syllabell count shined on this as well real nice overall not much more i can say good job 7/10