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11-15-05, 12:06 PM
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Strange Fruit
IP: 11AF 50EC
The taste of bein hopeful while feeling hoplessness
Understandable motions but confused motionless Strong ideas thought up while weak minded Anger gets fast forward and happiness is rewinded Feeling without a purpose while finding destiny Poetry spokin out loud but what your writing never speaks Vivid lines get written on lines invisible Realizing the impossible prayin for miracles Kisses are tender soft moments become bitter hard times You think the love is permanent turns out its part time You believe in god while the devil is workin 24/7 "What a hell of a life" you say... no wonder your searchin for heaven Believin bullshit opinions instead of learning the facts look in the mirror and your reflection's turning its back Bitter sweetness of joy grown from derranged roots Struggles become celebrated while bitten from Strange Fruit http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2539437 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2539444 Last edited by Lil C : 11-15-05 at 12:09 PM. |
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11-16-05, 08:05 AM
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IP: 11AF 50EC
come on ppl........uppin dis shit...............damn dont sleep on dis
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11-23-05, 10:49 PM
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this was actually really good.your imagery couldve been shown a little better here by maybe expanding more on the topic a little.............but your imagery was still very good.vocab and syllabell count shined on this as well real nice overall not much more i can say good job 7/10
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