After the Storm
 

this shit is 10 months old....second song i ever recorded...but first song i did with my homeboy...

check this shit out and tell me what you all think....

the voice....of me....isnt good....but man....it was 10 months ago and i was trying to be...different on this track...


Verse 1- Me
Hook and the rest of the verses- my homeboy


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Listening.......... Beats aight... i like that piano shit... your lyrics are good, but could use some more emotion.. also up your quality.. the chours is tight, you should put some effects on it to distinguish it from the verses.. overall good drop.. keep at it..

thanks man keep the feedback coming....ill Return the Favor if you all just leave some feed...

cant you all leave any feedback come on man....ill return favors if you just leave links...i need feedback people

aiight... first off... sup with that beat... kinda boring... on some "we'll always love big poppa" shyt...lol

anyways... first verse was so-so but ya pointed that out in da beginning.... content was good but void of emotion.... almost like reading off da page.... memorize ya verse or at least get the flow down before ya record and it'll sound more natural

hook is kool.... definitely a difference between this and the first verse... just didn't like how it came in... sounded like some cut and paste action was going on and it through the track off a lil bit....

second and third verse was definitely a lot better.... quality could still use work but this was put together better... almost like the first verse was added to a song already made... flow was on point throughout... again, liked the content....

getting back to da hook... "mom's sucking dick in da church"?.... whoa!... wild statement right there... but hey, i can see how that could happen...

aside from the beat and the issues with the first verse and quality, this wasn't too bad.... stay up.... try using some more up-to-date styled beats... don't have to be shyt we heard before but at least have that kinda feel to it