aiight... first off... sup with that beat... kinda boring... on some "we'll always love big poppa" shyt...lol

anyways... first verse was so-so but ya pointed that out in da beginning.... content was good but void of emotion.... almost like reading off da page.... memorize ya verse or at least get the flow down before ya record and it'll sound more natural

hook is kool.... definitely a difference between this and the first verse... just didn't like how it came in... sounded like some cut and paste action was going on and it through the track off a lil bit....

second and third verse was definitely a lot better.... quality could still use work but this was put together better... almost like the first verse was added to a song already made... flow was on point throughout... again, liked the content....

getting back to da hook... "mom's sucking dick in da church"?.... whoa!... wild statement right there... but hey, i can see how that could happen...

aside from the beat and the issues with the first verse and quality, this wasn't too bad.... stay up.... try using some more up-to-date styled beats... don't have to be shyt we heard before but at least have that kinda feel to it

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