Drop Stuff
 

Drop Stuff

This pathetical slaughter is in alphabetical order under attack
Like politicians on missions I’m criticize severely the facts
Wise and clearly available like news paper articles particles
Of truth still prevail without fail lots of crack in my vicinity
Time to track the enemy rap to cats an act to find a remedy
Attached to a group and dispatch troops like an army of harmony
Priced like sensitive material expensive lyrical are very stormy
So take out your bill fold and pay for these ill scrolls dawg
My scheme bold like extreme cold make cats shiver
Body reflex shaky complex and achy sensations quiver
No heat my flow unique, I go into streets with a river
Of rhymes like a stream of water scream and slaughter
Completely drown clowns have them stuck out on the altar
On a raised structure blaze this culture give sacrifice to god
Christ among men makes them nice from within because sin is odd

Upping For Responses Yall

This isnt that great and very generic

i thought it was ok, nothing really special. Vocab was cool for me, structure was fine but other than that it was just a regular piece.

hey yall thanks for the props and critique for real

my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=2158160)

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no links..and that isnt feedback