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11-27-05, 09:52 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Drop Stuff
IP: CF74 5D3A
Drop Stuff
This pathetical slaughter is in alphabetical order under attack Like politicians on missions I’m criticize severely the facts Wise and clearly available like news paper articles particles Of truth still prevail without fail lots of crack in my vicinity Time to track the enemy rap to cats an act to find a remedy Attached to a group and dispatch troops like an army of harmony Priced like sensitive material expensive lyrical are very stormy So take out your bill fold and pay for these ill scrolls dawg My scheme bold like extreme cold make cats shiver Body reflex shaky complex and achy sensations quiver No heat my flow unique, I go into streets with a river Of rhymes like a stream of water scream and slaughter Completely drown clowns have them stuck out on the altar On a raised structure blaze this culture give sacrifice to god Christ among men makes them nice from within because sin is odd |
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11-27-05, 09:16 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: CF74 5D3A
Upping For Responses Yall
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11-27-05, 11:14 PM | #3 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
This isnt that great and very generic
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11-28-05, 05:45 PM | #4 | ||||
I Chill in Asylums
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IP: 77EA BE46
i thought it was ok, nothing really special. Vocab was cool for me, structure was fine but other than that it was just a regular piece.
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11-29-05, 11:36 AM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: CF74 5D3A
hey yall thanks for the props and critique for real
my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=2158160) |
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11-29-05, 06:25 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 1BAE 58E9
Closed
no links..and that isnt feedback
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