"Louis"...A Rip Off Of Stan Lmfao...
 

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Word...me and Crazy Hades' version of Stan.

Verses 1-3: Written by Crazy Hades, Performed by Limited Edition.
Verse 4: Written and Perfromed by Limited Edition
Beat: Produced by Limited Edition

Word...I had troubles flowing Crazy's lyrics because it wasnt written to the beat...so if it's off...forgive me. I edited them as much as I could to flow better...but I couldn't change the words too much. The fourth verse was easy to flow with.

I'm sick as fuck too...this shit murdered my throat, but I was pumped to do this track.

Leave feed and I'll return the favor.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216103
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216217

the beats ight...lol original concept :thumbup: lol but it ight...the flows on almost perfect and the lyrics are dope..i had ta go DAMN at some of it...lol at u writing back a hateful letter on the 3rd verse...i was expectin the same stan beat but....this beat was ight..props at u producin it :thumbup:

id give this piece a 8/10.....4.5 for lyrics....3 for the storytellin and 1.5 for the concept...lol keep at it dawg u gettin better

Thanks...

Uppin'...it was slept on all night...

Let me break this down. I don't see why you'd rehash Em's concept unless you put a truly unique spin on it. And, from my perspective, you didn't really do that. As it stands on its own, this is a good track. However, my mind kept reverting back to Em's Stan and I concluded this falls short of his effort. The constant letters you rapped about became repetitive. Your flow is consistent throughout though.


Good track that could have stood out more with a hyper beat, better writing of the climax, and a more creative spin on an already dope concept.


I'd rate this 7/10

no hate


1

Haha yeah I know the entire concept was bitten...

...But this track was only for some fun.

Thanks for the feed.

Uppin'.

ROFL AT THE INTRO

Aight You Come On.....

Flows Nice-Why You Say Its Off?It Fell off Like 2wice I Thougth

Deliverys Nice,Can Tell Your Ill Though

Presence Is Nice

Lyrics On 1 To 3rd Are Nice Quite Deep Lmao@Why U Smoke Weed,Bad Behaviour Lol

3rd verse
Same As Others lol

Fourth Verse

Flows Nice

4th Lyrics Are Good,Flows A Lot Better...But Yeah Obviously

Lmao@Slim Shady Fake Bit

LMAO...At These Lyrics Lol

Ok

LMMFAO@RAPE ME LINE

Overall:8.5/10

Lol,Good Track

Plz Rtf On My:"Wanna B.Daniel"
Link:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216320

Thanks...

Uppin...

:) We are dope.

^^Get The Fuck on Aim

We Need To Make More Beats

Holla At My New Aim

Unf Aka B Daniel

I'm on. The AIM is I Defy AQ. Listen to the song.

listenin...lol at u becomin even more closer to bein eminem lol...beat is koo...eerie..flow is nice..fell off like 2wice...quality is koo..ps2 mic?...lyrics are always good from u..emotion is nice...presence on the mic is real nice..delivery nice...second verse....this is better...same as before jus better flow..didnt fall off really here...third the same as before...pretty much constant throughout..if the next one is a level better..this will be better..LOL at u fuckin kiddin me...LOL at chad mgchee cupid...flow is dope...LOL at slim shady bein fake..LOL at that shirt off line..haha i love this verse...crackin me up...rape me lol....LOL at the boy dying....gd track...

intro was aight but aint really feeling it ....emotion was aight to me but iono your verse was kinda on the blan side feel me that could of been upped...the beat was cool quality is aight overall this shit was decent stay up

A'ight thanks all...Ecko I'll return the favor sorry I couldn't hit you back earlier.

Uppin'.

checkin it...

intro is hot

come in a bit off..beat is..eh ok....flow is on..good story telling..decent shit

lmfao at oh my god not another letter haha lol, mmm nice beat, string gets anoyinh, nice flow, fells off sometimes but still good, oh my god you got to be fucking kidding me lmfao! nice responce to his letters, i seriously love this track, you should of put more emotions or frustration in the last verse, rapping me, whos the other voice??nice intro, love the outro, dope ass track

9/10