OOH girl (Willapeer you gon like this)
 

lol weerd

www.soundclick.com/jroy

yeahh check it out its the OOH Girl song

i'll rtf the favor


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Damn, i'm getting tired of peeps takin my beats and shit, lol. But yea, real catchin chorus. Verses pretty balanced and fit well on the beat. Just try to work on giving a more complex feel to your approach. ANd fade out the ending. Overall, decent track, i'm just mad somebody used that beat before me, lol.

8.5/10

PSA BITCHES

ahhhh jeah lol hahahhaha yeah psa is takin over

this is hot, hey that pic on ur soundclick is white but you dont sound white at all.

^^lol hahah for real...ehh its in my veins i suppose.....mehh.....i'mma do that crew collab tonight i'm still at school but i'm not gonna be tired tonight

pssf...took a YEAR to get this to work...my net is actin crazy


hook is creative


flow is nice



yea...ur the new Dabatos...all u rap about is love, girls, etc...



good track


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nice lyrics and a catchy chorus...

tight drop

uppin this biotch

upppin for more feed i'll rtf on anything

the beat is off the chains.... for starters.... realy feelin that joint

you got mad potential.... you still young... but where your at aint a bad spot... you could tell you feelin yourself.... delievery was coo... flow was there.... just a couple places there was some filler i felt .... aside from that... this was solid... you got pretty good quality .... the hook was hot aswell...


keep droppin man... only way to elevate

thanks man^^ i'll rtf

beat comin in decent...

chorus is decent..

quality is iffy....

lyrics is decent..voice is ok....flow is on..nice shit man for real...

to the top for my nigga Past Tense

woord holla at cha boi