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12-08-05, 03:06 AM | #1 | ||||
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OOH girl (Willapeer you gon like this)
IP: 12E7 3621
lol weerd
www.soundclick.com/jroy yeahh check it out its the OOH Girl song i'll rtf the favor Links ----- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215951 =========== http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214847 Last edited by Past Tense : 12-08-05 at 03:13 AM. |
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12-08-05, 11:10 AM | #3 | |||||||
Artist, that simple
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IP: 317F 66B6
Damn, i'm getting tired of peeps takin my beats and shit, lol. But yea, real catchin chorus. Verses pretty balanced and fit well on the beat. Just try to work on giving a more complex feel to your approach. ANd fade out the ending. Overall, decent track, i'm just mad somebody used that beat before me, lol.
8.5/10 PSA BITCHES
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12-08-05, 01:09 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: D184 BF12
ahhhh jeah lol hahahhaha yeah psa is takin over
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12-08-05, 02:35 PM | #5 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 9CF2 2208
this is hot, hey that pic on ur soundclick is white but you dont sound white at all.
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12-08-05, 04:16 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: D184 BF12
^^lol hahah for real...ehh its in my veins i suppose.....mehh.....i'mma do that crew collab tonight i'm still at school but i'm not gonna be tired tonight
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12-08-05, 04:40 PM | #7 | |||
OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
pssf...took a YEAR to get this to work...my net is actin crazy
hook is creative flow is nice yea...ur the new Dabatos...all u rap about is love, girls, etc... good track 1 |
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12-08-05, 05:18 PM | #8 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: F7E3 42B8
nice lyrics and a catchy chorus...
tight drop
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12-09-05, 05:31 AM | #9 | ||||
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IP: 12E7 3621
uppin this biotch
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12-09-05, 01:09 PM | #10 | ||||
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IP: D184 BF12
upppin for more feed i'll rtf on anything
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12-09-05, 01:20 PM | #11 | |||||||
El Padrino
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IP: 0EB4 1ACC
the beat is off the chains.... for starters.... realy feelin that joint
you got mad potential.... you still young... but where your at aint a bad spot... you could tell you feelin yourself.... delievery was coo... flow was there.... just a couple places there was some filler i felt .... aside from that... this was solid... you got pretty good quality .... the hook was hot aswell... keep droppin man... only way to elevate
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12-09-05, 08:08 PM | #12 | ||||
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IP: 12E7 3621
thanks man^^ i'll rtf
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12-09-05, 08:35 PM | #13 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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IP: A6CC 8109
beat comin in decent...
chorus is decent.. quality is iffy.... lyrics is decent..voice is ok....flow is on..nice shit man for real...
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12-09-05, 09:24 PM | #14 | |||||||
El Padrino
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IP: 0EB4 1ACC
to the top for my nigga Past Tense
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12-09-05, 09:28 PM | #15 | ||||
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IP: 12E7 3621
woord holla at cha boi
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