On The Mic Ft.Kishmeister(My New Delivery Fuck The Old Me)
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Ite........actually i think i perfer yo new delivery it's sounds better.....you made a good change.........ite your verse was nice good emotion, pressence n DELIVERY.......hook was ok but abit tooo repetive imo........kish had nice delivery, pressence thought once or twice but good verse overall.
Good track overall.........8.5/10 |
Thanks :)
Appreciate It No Doubt Lol I Couldnt Be Assed With The Hook I Gott Realll Bored Lol |
nice beat....kinda club type...
yea this delivery is 30 times better man...flow is good.... hook is pretty good actually...kinda catchy....BUT u gotta learn to mix it better so it sounds more like a hook... only problem with your part is the mixing...just learn how to mix better...and youll be putting out some nice stuff.... 2nd dude....is pretty nice.....hes just needs to touch up the flow a lil bit... thats really the only problem there.....its not a bad flow...it could just be upped a lil |
Thanks Man I Appreciate It:)
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Agreed with the mix on the hook and second dude.
He needs to touch up his flow just a bit Chorus is kinda catchy. never ehard your old delivery but i like this one. good song. |
WOrd Thx Man Upppppppppppppp
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lmao i always thought that u werent capable of rappin like this or sumthin
this delivery is sooooooooo much better |
hallaleuia, better....
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Thanks For Your Help Man..You Put It Harshly But It Helped Me A lot :thumbup: |
I like the intro...a little loudish
but energy comes in appropriate for this track there was some weird echo in ur vocals at about the 40 second mark around there 2nd cat, accent affects flow, and not in a good way, IMO decent 1 |
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Yeah He Edited it an it came out weird but he done the rest of my verse dope Thx for the feed:) |
*Uppppppppp!!!!*
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its str8...u..sound..2..young..tho..thats..ur..flaw
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Boo@My Voice...
You Really Quit Rap? Lol |
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