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Old 01-02-06, 02:09 PM   #1
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On The Mic Ft.Kishmeister(My New Delivery Fuck The Old Me)
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Old 01-02-06, 02:55 PM   #2
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Ite........actually i think i perfer yo new delivery it's sounds better.....you made a good change.........ite your verse was nice good emotion, pressence n DELIVERY.......hook was ok but abit tooo repetive imo........kish had nice delivery, pressence thought once or twice but good verse overall.

Good track overall.........8.5/10
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Old 01-02-06, 02:56 PM   #3
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Thanks

Appreciate It No Doubt Lol I Couldnt Be Assed With The Hook I Gott Realll Bored Lol
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Old 01-02-06, 03:27 PM   #4
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nice beat....kinda club type...

yea this delivery is 30 times better man...flow is good....

hook is pretty good actually...kinda catchy....BUT u gotta learn to mix it better so it sounds more like a hook...

only problem with your part is the mixing...just learn how to mix better...and youll be putting out some nice stuff....

2nd dude....is pretty nice.....hes just needs to touch up the flow a lil bit...

thats really the only problem there.....its not a bad flow...it could just be upped a lil
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Old 01-02-06, 03:31 PM   #5
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Old 01-02-06, 03:48 PM   #6
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Agreed with the mix on the hook and second dude.
He needs to touch up his flow just a bit
Chorus is kinda catchy.
never ehard your old delivery but i like this one.

good song.
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Old 01-02-06, 03:50 PM   #7
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Old 01-02-06, 05:33 PM   #8
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lmao i always thought that u werent capable of rappin like this or sumthin
this delivery is sooooooooo much better
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hallaleuia, better....
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Thanks For Your Help Man..You Put It Harshly But It Helped Me A lot
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I like the intro...a little loudish


but energy comes in appropriate for this track


there was some weird echo in ur vocals at about the 40 second mark
around there


2nd cat, accent affects flow, and not in a good way, IMO


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I like the intro...a little loudish


but energy comes in appropriate for this track


there was some weird echo in ur vocals at about the 40 second mark
around there


2nd cat, accent affects flow, and not in a good way, IMO


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Yeah He Edited it an it came out weird but he done the rest of my verse dope

Thx for the feed
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its str8...u..sound..2..young..tho..thats..ur..flaw
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