Mad Villany
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3338510
"mad villany"



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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219369
ike n blak

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219245
focus

I liked the intro


beat is good


Here's a tip...Don't DUB your entire verse



When you come in after a short pause, you sound sorta like LE (voice wise)


I like ur delivery in spots...some unique rhyming in spots...

I wasn't following ur lyrics here...not to say they were bad...but they went by me in spots


THis is an interesting sounding track


not bad homie


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Aight the beat is nice...flow & delivery is coo...you mos-def got a underground type style...lyrics is nice...quality is aight...over-all coo peice man keep it up.

-uNo-

thx ppl...............

ehhh...once more around for this shit

quality over quanity Choke.

yea.....how do you remember the P/w's to your 5000 accounts yo...and is it a pain in the ass to log out and back in every time u post in a different forum?...i wouuld think it would b easier to jus put AkA..bla bla Aka Mc Gimpo..ext in your sig...but ehh wtf do i know ?

ur lyrics are always on point

beat choice solid

delivery needs a bit of work

but your way ahead of the game specially kids like will stay pimpin

thx a lot bro...................good looks 1ne

cho you need to go leave some detailed feeds dawg this good beat good flow good voice good track isnt really going to cut it so post up 2 good links

LOL...yea,u rite yo,.....i'll do from now on but...this got nuff feed,u can close yo...

overdubs clutter the main vocals up to much...might wanna lower them a little and not have them over power your main vocals...delivery u don't seem comfortable on the mic...seems you are just reading your lyrics...no real vibe i get from it...flow is stiff needs some work. decent track.
feed used 1/20/06 "seaseme street freeverse"

ok thx man,way to get in more feed b4 willa closes this shit !!

but yea,i see wut u mean

Aigghhhh

Your strictly underground lol

Beats Dope

Feelin it

lol@laughin smaples

and samples

Aigghhhh


Flows on,needs tighetenin a lil bit

Deliverys aigh,needs a lil work but nothing that bad

LOL@Blind kids line

Presence is there

Emotions koo

Well..its a koo song yo

just make your delivery like more different lol like make it different in every line you know?

your lyrics are allways dope

LMFAO@Chastity belt

lol@samples

Koo track:)

Rtf:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220133

thxxxx ppllll./....................willa wen u read this again to close it....IM me fool !!