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Old 01-12-06, 05:18 PM   #1
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Old 01-12-06, 07:45 PM   #2
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I liked the intro


beat is good


Here's a tip...Don't DUB your entire verse



When you come in after a short pause, you sound sorta like LE (voice wise)


I like ur delivery in spots...some unique rhyming in spots...

I wasn't following ur lyrics here...not to say they were bad...but they went by me in spots


THis is an interesting sounding track


not bad homie


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Old 01-12-06, 07:55 PM   #3
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Aight the beat is nice...flow & delivery is coo...you mos-def got a underground type style...lyrics is nice...quality is aight...over-all coo peice man keep it up.

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Old 01-13-06, 02:57 PM   #4
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thx ppl...............
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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 01-16-06, 01:02 PM   #5
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ehhh...once more around for this shit
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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 01-16-06, 02:25 PM   #6
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quality over quanity Choke.
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Old 01-16-06, 04:49 PM   #7
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yea.....how do you remember the P/w's to your 5000 accounts yo...and is it a pain in the ass to log out and back in every time u post in a different forum?...i wouuld think it would b easier to jus put AkA..bla bla Aka Mc Gimpo..ext in your sig...but ehh wtf do i know ?
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"when i rap they say im radical...but if rappin dont do it...ima clap u in the clavicle to classical music"

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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 01-17-06, 11:31 PM   #8
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ur lyrics are always on point

beat choice solid

delivery needs a bit of work

but your way ahead of the game specially kids like will stay pimpin
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Old 01-20-06, 01:53 PM   #9
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thx a lot bro...................good looks 1ne
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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 01-20-06, 02:43 PM   #10
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cho you need to go leave some detailed feeds dawg this good beat good flow good voice good track isnt really going to cut it so post up 2 good links
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Old 01-20-06, 04:06 PM   #11
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LOL...yea,u rite yo,.....i'll do from now on but...this got nuff feed,u can close yo...
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"when i rap they say im radical...but if rappin dont do it...ima clap u in the clavicle to classical music"

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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 01-20-06, 06:19 PM   #12
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overdubs clutter the main vocals up to much...might wanna lower them a little and not have them over power your main vocals...delivery u don't seem comfortable on the mic...seems you are just reading your lyrics...no real vibe i get from it...flow is stiff needs some work. decent track.
feed used 1/20/06 "seaseme street freeverse"
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Old 01-21-06, 11:28 AM   #13
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ok thx man,way to get in more feed b4 willa closes this shit !!

but yea,i see wut u mean
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"when i rap they say im radical...but if rappin dont do it...ima clap u in the clavicle to classical music"

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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 01-21-06, 11:33 AM   #14
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Aigghhhh

Your strictly underground lol

Beats Dope

Feelin it

lol@laughin smaples

and samples

Aigghhhh


Flows on,needs tighetenin a lil bit

Deliverys aigh,needs a lil work but nothing that bad

LOL@Blind kids line

Presence is there

Emotions koo

Well..its a koo song yo

just make your delivery like more different lol like make it different in every line you know?

your lyrics are allways dope

LMFAO@Chastity belt

lol@samples

Koo track

Rtf:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220133
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Old 01-21-06, 04:37 PM   #15
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thxxxx ppllll./....................willa wen u read this again to close it....IM me fool !!
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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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