Sexin ft. Untamed HOOOTTT
 

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yeah peep that out i'll rtf on w/e just drop links


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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2623541
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218805

Club style track dont usually impress me. Quality is solid [/jealous] Track is good, but its very generic concept and shit. Beat is club, Liek i said not a big fan of club shit.
hook again is club,
second verse, same its very generic club style shit. Not saying thats bad, just personally not my preferance of rap.

And word to you using my definition of hip hop on your mysapce :)

lol word..i had too do it for dem haters sayin white people cant rap :) yeah we wanted too somthing quick so i wrote it down in 5 mins and hte hook in 2 then i recorded it and he did his shit

but thanks

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ok typing as I listen.......beat is very amateurish sounding......u opened wit hook but it didn't really have a catch phrase that really HOOKED me in....u was lacking that major factor in ya hook.......flow is decent...its shaky in spots....an its basic in general...coulda changed it up.....second dude I wasnt feeling his voice or delivery but his flow was decent.......all in all this was a subpar track IMO..no hate jus coulda been alot better especially as a club track biggest thing is the HOOK an u feel short there to me........anyways keep dropping....stay up........1

I like the beat

who spit 1st?

when you said "day", it sounded like "SDAY, SDAY"

flow is coo tho...

lyrics are lackluster...topics like this one are common. So, you have to come with creative imagery to pull them off

wassup with the pause between the 1st verse and the hook? I thought the track was over already...


decent track...lacks appeal though
Feed used 1-18-06 "lord i want to live again"



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I spit first... :)

yay thanks tho

i'll def. hit ya'll back

aight uppin this once again