i like the way...
 

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this is a song that i wrote out of boredom but ended up likin so wutchall think

link to song
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=468135

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links-----cho, mi, and tha q=be ez

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...4289post2674289

-----team one= aim for hte head

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2674286

aight i noticed u aint getting any feed so ima feed you

this track is pretty decent. not my type of track,
but i understand rappers gotta do these tracks to make that money.

matter fact i like it when its all in ya mouth hahaha

the hook is alrite. not much energy in it.

the verses are fine tho, flo is nice. aint feelin this beat tho lol. its mad simple

ur voice is interesting...u sound very young or something

hook and lyrics are trying to stand out, but they lack refinement...ur flow could be smoother


keep elevatin



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listening...

Beat sounds like a damn circus...Lmfao at Heeeeey gurrrrrrrl...Quality is pretty dope for your faggity set-up. Youre dope at mixing...Not my type of song, but its hot for a club banger...Lmfao at I like it when its up in your mouth...Haha nice. Overall, decent shit man. I just dont like this commercial type shit.

^lol...iight biatch...yea i wrote that up in your ear,mouth,rear, shit as a joke at first, lmao....but jea, youd be amazed at wut pantyhose and a hanger can do...

*but ima keep doin these kinda trakks lol, i jsut dont like rappin bout depressin shit

I'm liking the fel of this track. You do got a pretty high pitched voice. Flow could use a little polishing and your dubs were off a little. I like this track though......it's fun :D

Aight i'm peepin now

you sound like you gotta be 13-14 and you got decent quality for someone that young most kids your age are lazy and dont record right....this is alright..i dont like the beat..iono it just doesn't appeal too me....its straight..your flow is good for this beat....your hook is alright....you gotta finda a style you sound like thats what your tryin too do now..

overall this ainta bad track
7.7/10

Rydin By HOTTEST TRACK
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3565050

this is a hot lil track that i put together.....it got track of the week on letsbeef and it was the first track i dropped

well leave feed and i'll do the same


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223420
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223378

*listenin*

u sound realllllllll young.... u got decent quality..... i dont really like these type of songs...... but its aight for the type of track it is....... hook is decent... it seems like u have two hooks, but the first one sounds soooooo low, u might wanna turn it up...... i dont really like ur delivery but atleast u have one, lol..... i cant understand u sometimes, might wanna rerecord some parts....

beat is decent, but real repetitive and simple........

decent track, pc

i dunno man....i dont think this type of song is for you....you sound young, you need a more mature crunk voice to do the 'shake that ass' type song....but on the up side, lyrics aren't bad...hook is okay.....delivery is eh...its there, a lil too complicated for the beat....you gon need alot more energy for the song to hit....but its not bad...just keep workin on it

I Used This Beat Before...........


AIghttt

You Sound Young Too Lol:)

Flows Nice,Feeling your delivery suits this club track,the beat dont really suit it,the lyrics are koo for the kinda track it is,nah mean

Hooks nice,mixed a lil too much though


Second verse volume is just wow compared too hook

But the actual verse is solid

Hook


3rd Verse Solid

Overall

Good Track,Feeling The Vibe

Keep Up
Pz

all in all u did ya thing not my flavor but it worked for ya mixing is tyte dubbs need refinement ull def get there tho 1up