Let Me In Feat. UNF
 

Little collab we put together.

www.soundclick.com/therevelation

I left feed on Ennui Till Sunrise and Nyg's Make It Easy.

You got a good presence on this track. You flow pretty well also. Only complaint I would have would be your quality just a little. Your dubs were off just a little also. I wasn't feeling the empty hook.....should have filled it up with something. Second verse needed the same energy as the first. Flow sounded a little choppy, could use a couple more takes. Keep elevating though :thumbup:™

Return the favor...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224692

word,ill rtf soon,this is the OLD me
lol

Wait till you hear
"Soldier Status" Ft.Fux

Gonna Be Hooott!

still gotta work on pronunciation some unf...although it is getting better...i liked your flow on this...lyrically it was pretty nice...work on mixing some...making your vocals warmer...

rev is def getting better....flow has gotten tons better since last time i listened...u need to cop a new setup man..i think your to the point where u should do that..u do need to polish the flow a lil more though...its not perfection yet...but i admit...its WAY better than what it used to be...presence is also pretty nice....not bad man...

overall this track had potential..its nothing i would download and put on a cd or nothing...but you both are def. getting better with time....only thing i can tell u both is to keep recording and keep recording..cause thats really the only way to get better...good job on the track fellas...keep working

LOL u record now? I never knew that? y didnt u ever tell me? we coulda collabed :(.. well yea lisetning..

which is who?? lol.. ya both sound the same.. man lol wierd? haha.. but yea.. lyrics ofcoures dope as always.. but yea here

1st verse.. Delivery very much on point.. no up and downs at all.. quality is good enough.. not bad at all.. lyrics good.. flow on point.. alot of energy put into it..

2nd verse.. same feedback as first.. only think u need to up is delivery and emotion.. emotion is there and so with delivery.. jst put more energy into it.. and ill be perfect..

word at track.. gj guys

thanks

who were you taslkin to about collabin i was up first

First guy is tite, brings a diff flow than the usual. Lyrics are fire in some parts, I was digging. The 2nd guy totally brings this track down with his quality, definitely didn't work. His flow is also awful, not really my style on his lyrics as well.

Keep bringin hot tracks!
pz
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...836#post2695836

thanks.upp.....................