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Old 03-19-06, 01:17 AM   #1
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"Enygma The Lush" new one from your boooooooyyyyy!!!!!

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Old 03-19-06, 05:21 PM   #3
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Fucking peep my shit you bitches
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Old 03-19-06, 05:26 PM   #4
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Old 03-19-06, 06:44 PM   #5
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crack open a cold brewskey huh?

whoa bro...What's up with your vocal quality? I can hear hiss in the background, as if you didn't run noise redux...Also, your vocals sound muddled. Lower those L and raise those Hs some.

I like your flow tho. And, your hook is dope to me. Feelin it...got me all crunked up!

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Old 03-19-06, 07:26 PM   #6
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Yeah.....I thought maybe I was just hearing shit that no one else would, but I guess not

I'll fix it
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Old 03-23-06, 11:01 AM   #7
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sorry sir.....ok the beat choice is pretty decent ..ya flow is seriously evolving ..no problems from this banger ..was just scared cuz u gettin all hostile so i was forced to leave feedback
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Old 03-23-06, 02:44 PM   #8
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lol.. first.. fix the quality haha.. i know u can do better with that mr. army guy lol.. but yea.. other than that, ur flow, delivery, and lyrics were on point.. but hey fam.. i would like to see a song with you actually not tryin to fit 20 words in one line haha.. it could be a challenge for you.. i mean not to be mean.. like ur style's cool.. jst try to do something with a flow tahts not as fast.. yea there u go tahts wut i mean hehe.. but yea nice song.. damn all these old skewl heads doing alot of songs.. im comin back =P

rtf feed plz mr. army guy

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Old 03-24-06, 12:56 AM   #9
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you already heard the quality stuff....and you already heard the props on ya flow, lyrics, n delivery....my only addition to what people said was in the first verse...the backround vocals seemed a lil off....it took away from the verse....the second verse was good....so yea....listen to it again n try n fix that maybe.....either turn it down or somethin is just sounds off.....but nothing taken away from you tho.....great track man....your one of the few im starting to respect in here
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