Raw Evilness Ft M.I Tha Q U-God and Raekwon
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3786648

"raw evilness"

M.I

then

Q

then

Ebircs

then
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U-God

then Rae

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224972

j-summers

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225803

nos

whos that crazy kid with the vocab.... he rips...psyche.. i am just ridin my own dick ... ha ... this track was about a month into my spits... again i must say the mixing is gettin better ...good job CHO...WERD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
what up q .... what time is it... what ... say what again muthafucka say what again .....
get up on this with some feed folks...

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ight im listenin..frist dude

flow-fell off a lil bit but mostly stayed on 4/5
delivery-5/5
presence-5/5
lyrics-4/5 iono they were good just lacking a lil sumthin

second dude
flow-5/5
delivery-5/5 i like the lil lauren hill thing you did towards the end nice way to put some comedic relief into the song
presence-5/5
lyrics-4.5/5

third dude
flow-4.5 fell off a lil but mostly stayed on your flow is like E-40's
delivery-5/5
presence-5/5
lyrics-4.5/5

over all i give this track a 4.5/5 i liked straight up..just work on flows and lyrics more(not sayin that their bad just not great yet) and ya'll should be straight good track peace

Listenin' first dude has good quality, I dont like his voice..flow is decent..got too many words in the verse..but flow is decent..delivery I like..emotion is real nice...Q...I like how you came in, flow is real str8, I def like it...delivery again is very good..multis are good, hahah at thaaaattt thiiingggg.....cho...flow is improvin' alot and decent..presence ure right is tight but dubbs are a lil off...work on stop havin too many words in a line....cut out tha uneccesary words...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...213#post2720213

can you rtf>...

thxxxxxxxxxxxx bro.and will RTF in a min