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03-24-06, 12:07 PM
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Mafia Stylins.. Where My Fam At... Shere Kahn.. J. Summers
IP: 3804 C02F
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224969
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224919 Mafia Stylins (Where My Fam At) dope track.. J Summers on hook first and third Shere Kahn on second and third nice lil mafia soundin banger beat by bobby ruckuss www.myspace.com/jsummersandbreezus first track it plays right when you get there.... havent loaded onto s.click yet
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03-24-06, 01:40 PM
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i like it....didnt listen intently enough to break it down if you want me to ill go back n do it....i just wanted to comment on the second dude....sounds like e40...thats sick...he should cover an e-40 song....itd sound the exact same haha....good workin
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03-24-06, 07:01 PM
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word up this shit
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03-25-06, 11:17 AM
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fuck up ffff
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03-27-06, 10:57 AM
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bullshit need feedback
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03-28-06, 05:27 PM
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good shit good shit.....up this..
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03-28-06, 05:33 PM
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man...I'm gonna blow this bitch up if yall don't stop droppin some feed...haha jk.....up
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03-30-06, 11:44 AM
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Wow.....no love on this, huh....lol.
First thing I noticed is that the hook and flow doesn't really fit the theme.....I think it's mainly the beat though. Cause the flow fits the beat and so does the hook, but I just think this was a bad choice of beat for this type of track. J Summers came pretty nice in this one. I know you probably heard a hundred times that you sound like a little kid, but that's not always a bad thing. Shere Kahn came in pretty nice. Presence is pretty good. Slipped up the flow a little in the second verse.....Third verse, I like how you guys split it up like that. Overall, this was a pretty good track......the beat started growing on me by the end for fitting this theme  ™
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03-30-06, 12:01 PM
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hell ya its tha godfather theme... 19 and still sounds young as fuck.. i love that shit babay
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03-30-06, 12:17 PM
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o maaaan this is beat and half dawg....love the god fathether theme...hook is catchy as hell....first verse is good flow n lyrics n punches are goood....2nd verse is tight good work i like the 3rd verse to how it got split up between you 2 it was a good contrast in voices i liked it good track man
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03-30-06, 12:51 PM
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Ayo!
Beats Dope,Dont Fit The Topic Really Though Hook=Nice,Feelin The Flow On It First Up!: Flows Nice,Feelin The Switch Up,Lyrics Are Nice,...Emotions Koo Feelin The Way You Rocking The Beat Man......Delivery Is Koo,Shits Hype Nah Mean?...Presence Is Noticable,Seem Mad Confident,Your Flow Dont Fall Off At All,Yo We Gotta Collab Hook.............. Second: Word,Flows Nice,A Lil Different,Hmm..Falls Off A Lil But You Get It Back,Emotion Matches The Track,V.Nice,Delivery's Straight,Feelin It...Presnece Is There,Seem Confident Enough......Your Lyrics Are Nice, Hoookkk... Third Verse: Word This Is Proly The Best Verse..The Switches Work Well,Shere Your Flow Dont Fall off On This Split Up Verse,EMotions Ko,J Summers Dope Shit Overall:9/10 Good Shit Keep Up. Yo J Summers Get At Me,We Gotta Collab!
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03-30-06, 05:16 PM
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nice hook man....beats tight
1st shit....flow n emotion on point...multis r nice,lyrics kinda simple but fit the topic well hooks nice nice flow man...real smooth,lyrics iight,nice voice for it n shit..good shit this was a tight track man
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03-31-06, 06:33 PM
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sheaaa J. SUMMERS.............
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03-31-06, 09:36 PM
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listening through audio technica ath m40-fs's
beat's ok imo. Vocal quality on the first verse is ok. Lyrics are pretty good so far, 'organized crime' not an approach I've heard in a while. Hook was ok, I guess. not bad, but didn't have me like "oh shit son"which is normal for a hook. Could use some compression on it to level everything out a little. Second vese was pretty good, could use some EQing in the highs a little bit. nice flow, same type lyrics. 'good fellas' punch was cool. Third verse seemed like an 8 and was too short to say much about that's diferent from what I haven't said already 4th comes in nice with some high energy and flows well. more of the same from the other verse, seems liek u guys shared a 16. That's about it, then the track ended. yup
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