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11. SlicKnife (1-0) vs 12. Nick Fletcher (2-1)
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I got this. :)
Here are them links again.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227405 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227397 |
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14 lines is cool with me. Check it.
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Man, droppin’ them lines on poor folk, its ironic when you speak them.. When everyone knows when you drop bars…… ………you just pick them back up and EAT THEM!!! . . Here we go, I’m battling Knife… ure wack kid, leave.. I wish you would Or I’ll have to pull out the switchblade – and hope you switch to someone good Fuck, this is a mismatch!! It’s a fantasy nerd vs. the king of bling Cuz whilst I love to throw dough……… ……Slick just loves that dude from Lord of the Rings!!! Watch me swamp you with shots… and dude, I leave no evidence Ya see bitch ^^ that’s just my style – like it is ure place of residence Slick’s a heavyweight possessed, so I’ll call a priest for this spar And exorcise you bitch… cuz being fat won’t get you far!! :eek: Literally son. Now you know slick will come weak tonight Cuz if he drops too many power bars…… ………his energy will burn out halfway through the fight!! Bringin’ the wrong shit, this ain’t punk rock… you can get beat right And with the LBL, you can Fallout Boy, cuz this is a FUCKING RAP SITE!! |
Haha...this is about to get more sad than when you wrote that 100-bar diss...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...508#post2704508 Quote:
Shit, You were just meant to be poor…life gets hard man, end her before… & Incomes a bitch…is just what people say when you enter the door!!! Whats more, these bars are real heavy Nick bet you get a real sense… Then again your lines have such little substance…even the air starts to feel dense Why reveal them…see Im second to none, I just freely son queers… While second to none…is just the range of time you should be on here RV hates you bitch, the U.S heads know & from the U.K its fact… But just fuck that…when even Palestine knows this cat Israeli whack Maybe your past it, but in this battle Im set to see you drop… Because if Im pure gold…then a rusty Nickle never be on top Guaranteed, now try to no avail from what your dreadin’ son… Thats why a last ditch effort…wont save you from ending up dead in one Really Nick, you claim to be Super Duper when your a failure mate… ‘Cause bitch that isnt just stretching the truth…its getting it tailor-made!!! Word. |
Wizzow!! And shit...
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Haha
this is a good battle, vote! |
Man, droppin’ them lines on poor folk, its ironic when you speak them..
When everyone knows when you drop bars…… ………you just pick them back up and EAT THEM!!! I’m battling Knife… ure wack kid, leave.. I wish you would Or I’ll have to pull out the switchblade – and hope you switch to someone good Watch me swamp you with shots… and dude, I leave no evidence Ya see bitch ^^ that’s just my style – like it is ure place of residence Slick’s a heavyweight possessed, so I’ll call a priest for this spar And exorcise you bitch… cuz being fat won’t get you far!! Bringin’ the wrong shit, this ain’t punk rock… you can get beat right And with the LBL, you can Fallout Boy, cuz this is a FUCKING RAP SITE!! vs. You were just meant to be poor…life gets hard man, end her before… & Incomes a bitch…is just what people say when you enter the door!!! Why reveal them…see Im second to none, I just freely son queers… While second to none…is just the range of time you should be on here RV hates you bitch, the U.S heads know & from the U.K its fact… But just fuck that…when even Palestine knows this cat Israeli whack Maybe your past it, but in this battle Im set to see you drop… Because if Im pure gold…then a rusty Nickle never be on top Guaranteed, now try to no avail from what your dreadin’ son… Thats why a last ditch effort…wont save you from ending up dead in one dayumm.. good battle. i have a tie in quotables here. hmm. nick you had alot of good shit. but theres somethin about ur wordin i'm not feelin. like, i feel some of that shit could flow better and not as stretched. but slcik, a lil of the same. but still, you had fire. the last bar i quoted("ditch" line), i've seen it before, but that was a good flip. i feel like you had the harder hits and came real good. good shit from both, but nick.. shouldn't have under-estimated ur opponent. v/ slicknife |
Fletcher.... work on your wording... it is killing the impact of your verse. A couple decent ideas but nothing really came together as it should.
Slic... work on not using overdone wordplay... the israeli line was VERY played. incomes a bitch has been done... the second to none line was a good flip on that cliche... basically... slic worded his punches much better and had a few good ones in there. Nick didnt have much due to the weak wording v/Slicknife |
Watch me swamp you with shots… and dude, I leave no evidence
Ya see bitch ^^ that’s just my style – like it is ure place of residence vs You were just meant to be poor…life gets hard man, end her before… & Incomes a bitch…is just what people say when you enter the door!!! Why reveal them…see Im second to none, I just freely son queers… While second to none…is just the range of time you should be on here RV hates you bitch, the U.S heads know & from the U.K its fact… But just fuck that…when even Palestine knows this cat Israeli whack v/ Slick |
Man, droppin’ them lines on poor folk, its ironic when you speak them..
When everyone knows when you drop bars…… ………you just pick them back up and EAT THEM!!! . . Here we go, I’m battling Knife… ure wack kid, leave.. I wish you would Or I’ll have to pull out the switchblade – and hope you switch to someone good Literally son. Now you know slick will come weak tonight Cuz if he drops too many power bars…… ………his energy will burn out halfway through the fight!! vs. Shit, You were just meant to be poor…life gets hard man, end her before… & Incomes a bitch…is just what people say when you enter the door!!! RV hates you bitch, the U.S heads know & from the U.K its fact… But just fuck that…when even Palestine knows this cat Israeli whack Guaranteed, now try to no avail from what your dreadin’ son… Thats why a last ditch effort…wont save you from ending up dead in one This was a very close battle both came very consistent, as you can see both are equal on qoutables. Both had some nice lines. But I think Slick had the better qoutable. The Income, it was a Personal, wordplay, and Humorous. Very dope line. I laughed for a while. I'll give it to Slick Vote - SlicKnife |
Man, droppin’ them lines on poor folk, its ironic when you speak them..
When everyone knows when you drop bars…… ………you just pick them back up and EAT THEM!!! Literally son. Now you know slick will come weak tonight Cuz if he drops too many power bars…… ………his energy will burn out halfway through the fight!! Watch me swamp you with shots… and dude, I leave no evidence Ya see bitch ^^ that’s just my style – like it is ure place of residence vs You were just meant to be poor…life gets hard man, end her before… & Incomes a bitch…is just what people say when you enter the door!!! RV hates you bitch, the U.S heads know & from the U.K its fact… But just fuck that…when even Palestine knows this cat Israeli whack Guaranteed, now try to no avail from what your dreadin’ son… Thats why a last ditch effort…wont save you from ending up dead in one vote:slick....real dope battle, kinna close..jus bout everything was quoteable to me |
So its 5-0 to me....
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So, its a win for you. And that shows, never underestimate your opponent.
Props on a dope verse. :thumbup: |
Word...
Good battle man, you still had nice lines in there |
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