Poison [Circle of life]
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3964918

^^^ Poison ^^

tried some new shit here...thought it worked well








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fendi
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228513
Tito n Q
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2748164

aigght your vox all sound monotone flows on point...delivery is jus borin in this track....i would like this track but i think you need to respit it....lyrics is cool i like yo topic on this...gud drop yo

Lyrics are good and the rhyming is nice

Flow is on point, but could stand for some change ups

Delivery is monotone, even though you were attempting to be melodic...switch the key/pitch every once in a while


solid drop bro





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thx man..........