http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2747133

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227894

some shit i threw together...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3954862

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"LATELY I'VE BEEN FEELING CRAZY N NOBODY UNDERSTANDS ME
BUT THEY GON CLAIM THEY KNOW ME WHEN I GO AND GET MY GRAMMYS"

GOT FENDI?

beat not really feeling it to be honest
singing if thats you best to hit rv ever
first verse nothing really wow lyric wise flow was good but some parts you rushed
flow fell off a little bit in the beginning of this verse lyrics were cool


overall this track was pretty cool only major problems is your quality and in parts it sounds like your screaming kind of and your breath control
strong points is your emotion
DAMN YOU i just dl this beat yesterday lol : / oh well hit me up well remake the track

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ight im'a leave feed for the soon ta be most successful girl out there

ight the beat i love..i think i might have that beat somewhere in one of my beat folders
the beat is very energized makes ya just wanna jump outta ya seat and start jumpin around lol.....but yea good beat chioce

im defintly feelin the hook its kinda generic but it hott and gets stuck in ur head real eazy...lol hell yea u got that good shit for when it comes to hooks cuz it defintly got me hooked like a fish

ight for ur lyrics they kinda generic id say they average...nuthin special but yea u dont have ta be the best lyricist ta put meaning behind ur words...u defintly have some enthusiasm in that vioce of urs...flow is ight u did well wit the flow
delivery was pretty good and i usually never worry bout quality cuz quality has nuthin ta do wit talent but ur quality is real good too...nuthin ta complain about there

ight we gettin inta the switch up near the end which i gotta say is dope and addicting as all hell fo sho...haha where the hell did u find that beat yo its real dope
"i was getting some head...i was, i was getting some head" lol that shit real addicting
shit playin back in my head for the next hour and a half haha
like i said before ur lyrics are ok nuthin special but i defitnly could listen 2 this a few times keep at it ma

overall this is way too dope of a song ta be slept on..i think these muthafuckas is in kindagardon or sumthin cuz they think it nap time but fo real this aint no shit ta sleep on...im feeling it more than michael jackson when he feels lil boys..haha...but anyway yea i'd give this atleast a 8.5/10...aint a deep track like ur other one but i'd bump it fo sho
keep hitting these nontalented muthafuckas wit the shit they aint ready 4

UPPIN FOR MY GIRL...

P.S: i just put ur song on my psp

This is pretty good your flow is pretty good better then most on rv your vocals are way too loud you can barley the beat sooo you need too work on that........honestly I think you gotta be the best femcee i've heard on this site......and on the net kinda....if you had better quality and what not you'd be 100 percent better your quality is what kills it...

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this is prett good.....i like the beat.nice selection
you have a popfilter?...if not use one, if you do, get a new one..hahaha
flow is on point and lyrics are good as well. the delivery is very impressive as well


final comments....
work on your qualty most defintaely......thats where you need to improve at..

other then that...this was a solid drop..

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listening.....beat aint really my style...flow is decent could be improved in a couple of spots...you stayin on beat for the most part....the hook needs a lil more emotion...lyrics are pretty good....overall a pretty decent track 7/10

i see you reppin dat naptown too....hold it down

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qualitys bad....clipping like a mofo....your voice is nice...your clipping like fuck...flows not bad though...you need better delevery though...lyrics iight...not bad...

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

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Thanks for all the feedback im not really into the "Club song" thing i ususally just make whatever i feel like .. but this was for a performance at my university ...so had to make something catchy .. and then the gettin some head was the most popular song at the time.... this is the most feedback ive ever recieved on this site... so thank you to everyone who took the time to listen to my shit..

Fendi ..

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"LATELY I'VE BEEN FEELING CRAZY N NOBODY UNDERSTANDS ME
BUT THEY GON CLAIM THEY KNOW ME WHEN I GO AND GET MY GRAMMYS"

GOT FENDI?

dont forget ta give me props for uppin ur shit...lol cuz of me it probably woulda been on the bottom of the forum ignored...but yea UPPIN AGAIN

by the way are u related to lupe fiasco?? lol just thought i'd ask

You really need some help on your quality.

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That is a good tutorial to start with. Once you get your shit down with those presets and shit, your shit should sound ten times better. Flow and everything else were on point.....just up the quality and you'd be pretty dope ™

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i saved the page to my pc .. imma try that out on my next track ...thanks

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"LATELY I'VE BEEN FEELING CRAZY N NOBODY UNDERSTANDS ME
BUT THEY GON CLAIM THEY KNOW ME WHEN I GO AND GET MY GRAMMYS"

GOT FENDI?

Yea,for a performance this is real catchy. I like this, you got a hot flow, and great emotion. You are prolly the best femcee on the net. You just need better quality. You should get some good equipment and make a cd, cuz you'll prolly have hella people who want more of you after your performance. Good luck. 1