Like A Movie - Story of my Life........leave links ill RTF
 

yea...really deep, true story on my life....n how i feel

Like A Movie - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4104071




links - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4104071

sending errr up....

damn... it's like no one wants to leave OYD feed... I understand we be flooding the forum with trax and shyt but damn... it's just passion for da music....

anyways... i was really feeling this... the beat was hot... kinda had an early eminem feel to it.... the whole ear infection thing was serious... 98 % deaf by the age of three and able to do the music like you doing it right now.... crazy...

lyrics were cool... good topic... hook was pretty good... coulda flowed a lil better with the last two lines but it was aiight...

i'd say not to use so much echo effect though... i think it was a bit overused... other than that.. pretty solid track...

then again... IT's OYD!!!

levels appear to be mixed well
beat is good

delivery/voice reminds me of Tito on this early on

flow is consistent throughout

I like the hook

This track is well written, if not a little unassuming. But, it's personal, so that compensates for the lack of panache.


Good drop bro


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I like the beat

I like the effect on the intro.....you gotta hard white boi voice..like eminem i like it..sounds dope

Opening up the flow was good..and emotion and delivery was good..had my head poppin....i like this .....your lyrics are good.....especially for this type of track.....

The Hook is str8.....like the concept

This is a pretty good trakc no doubt

keep doin ya thing

FUCKING DOOOOOOOOOOOOPE

Its goddamn 2:50 in the morning, so thats all you get, but I really enjoyed it.

im liking the beat...

your pronunciation is very good.....flow is really nice....so is your delivery...

damn man this is pretty good...

i dunno what to say thats wrong with this...shit is pretty dope......

im liking the personal lyrics as well...


dope shit man...we should collab or something

Your pressense is shown very well, nice a clear with a great delivery. Your flow was pretty solid as well, you seem to be getting better fast man good shit. Your lyrics are decent, some flaws in some places but it aint bad. This beat I dislike, it's not horrible but it aint that hot for a banger you know. overall I thought you did a good job with your parts, the beats just gay lol.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230367

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Playing........ intro's ok, slightly attention grabbing.

beats ok, kicks in nice, quality is good, lyrics are ok, nothing to mind blowing.

Hook could be alot better bro, but it still does the job. track gets a bit broing in this, but your flow stays on point and lyrics continue to run solid in it.

Good track bro.

uppin for more views

like the echo in the begining ..beat sounds...nice man..like the violin...flows nice here...emotion n shits on point, feeling the multis here...really feel the topic so far bro, im in some simular shit rite now...ear infection line pushed a bit hard, bit of a look into ur life here, not bad, hooks cool n shit, coulda said more w the bars u set ....lota wasted time IMO...nice tho man

1ne

Listening...

I'm liking the beat so far...

Uhh...nevermind...I didnt like the switch up...

Flow is good...breath control sounds to lack a bit sometimes. The hook could have been more catchy but it was good. Wow at the 98% deaf shit...crazy man. It's a miracle you made through that.

Very soid track...I liked it alot.

Keep it up.

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anyone else wunna leave feed ??

lookin for one or two more opinions