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KempoMRK 07-09-06 10:22 AM

9. N.Tavarez (6-1) vs 10. Daubs (9-6)
 


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Daubs 07-09-06 05:08 PM

here we go again, GL lad.

N.Tavarez 07-10-06 08:56 AM

im probably keeping it a short 10
GL to you too

N.Tavarez 07-13-06 12:04 PM

9. N.Tavarez (6-1) vs 10. Daubs (9-6)

Daubs just keeps having the hard opponents. It’s pretty harsh really as his record looks shite, where as he’s a lot better than it. If he loses he’ll go to 9-7 which will be a very bad reflection of him. This should be pretty close though, but I think Tavarez will edge it out.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Daubs
Nothin i can do with the opponents im gettin.

Cool mag.

Read the thread i made in the tag tourney forum lad.



Fuck is Kemp supposed to do? LBL competition is plenty
Plus your ass is outmatched by most of the cats that IN the top twenty
And the tag tourneys the biggest indication you suck whore
Caught a loss in a battle ONLY YOU showed up for? damn
Daubs I KO"D you 5 times, you left the battle broke jerk
So fuck a win bitch, you gotta try and get some votes 1st
We meet again? Im'a splatter and end him
Cuz if 'threes's a charm'......then six has got to be a platinum pendant
And I know you hate me kid so forgive my cocky attitude
But how can Daubs intimidate me when even the mods keep feeling bad for you?
Yeah I lost the belt to butler.....he's pretty good you cunt
But you been in the league twice as long as me
And never been to the champ ships once.........
Fuck wordplay, my personals making you flop more
this loss is graphic, like the ONLY thing RV will give you props for
capish?

N.Tavarez 07-13-06 01:02 PM

fucking loser drop already!
you beeeeen online

Daubs 07-13-06 01:09 PM

I just got in from work and am gonna start writing soon.
Shut the fuck up.

Daubs 07-13-06 01:34 PM

Kemp can suck a dick with his shit rules...

yeah your a prick and on my dick but il let it slide
cause we all need t 'avarez....after heavy exercise
kemps against me, but fuck it cause that kids wack
so how you NOT gonna find dirt on me when it comes from his mag
wack fuck acts tuff but his raps suck, i know im doubtin em
cuz hows he gonna man up when he's known for goin down on them
and your girls prolly cheatin now the les, n' aint hatin son
but how can she not like a bit of pussy when shes dating one
im in the top 10 despite kempos efforts to get me laying off
whereas your in the top 10 as a result of his effort paying off
now butler wont be battlin this week, and i know that its sad
but he got locked up on sex charges after raping you so bad
and that wasnt just painful, it was murder that you cant controll
and you shit yourself so bad yur organs rolled outa your arsehole

rushed last few.

N.Tavarez 07-13-06 01:49 PM

ready for votes

DaTrusHurtz 07-13-06 02:46 PM

And the tag tourneys the biggest indication you suck whore
Caught a loss in a battle ONLY YOU showed up for? damn
And I know you hate me kid so forgive my cocky attitude
But how can Daubs intimidate me when even the mods keep feeling bad for you?
Yeah I lost the belt to butler.....he's pretty good you cunt
But you been in the league twice as long as me
And never been to the champ ships once.........

vs.

yeah your a prick and on my dick but il let it slide
cause we all need t 'avarez....after heavy exercise

I liked Tav's verse due to its personal nature. A few of the personals coulda used more wit to them instead of bein' stated blandly, but most of them were done pretty well. Daubs, opener was nice though a bit forced. If Butler really wasn't battling this week that line woulda been quotable, but he is. Other stuff was aight, but Tav just came more consistent and harder so he got this.

Vote - N. Tav

Untold 07-13-06 05:44 PM

And the tag tourneys the biggest indication you suck whore
Caught a loss in a battle ONLY YOU showed up for? damn
Daubs I KO"D you 5 times, you left the battle broke jerk
So fuck a win bitch, you gotta try and get some votes 1st
We meet again? Im'a splatter and end him
Cuz if 'threes's a charm'......then six has got to be a platinum pendant
And I know you hate me kid so forgive my cocky attitude
But how can Daubs intimidate me when even the mods keep feeling bad for you?
Yeah I lost the belt to butler.....he's pretty good you cunt
But you been in the league twice as long as me
And never been to the champ ships once.........

vs.

nothing, imo!

daubs, wow! what happened to you? that shit was either mad rushed, or just not tryin man. like, u either need to take some time off or start tryin more in your battles. u really came weak this time. but tavarez, alot that shit was FIRE man. really feelin ur verse and the personals! like, nice shit man. wish you would'a drop'd like this with u and butler last week, still. dope sonz. keep droppin more shit like this.

v/ hotshhh!

Euthanize. 07-13-06 09:15 PM

Tavarez

Fuck is Kemp supposed to do? LBL competition is plenty
Plus your ass is outmatched by most of the cats that IN the top twenty
okay wording was a bit off, but nice personal
And the tag tourneys the biggest indication you suck whore
Caught a loss in a battle ONLY YOU showed up for? damn
decent
Daubs I KO"D you 5 times, you left the battle broke jerk
So fuck a win bitch, you gotta try and get some votes 1st
again. decent.
We meet again? Im'a splatter and end him
Cuz if 'threes's a charm'......then six has got to be a platinum pendant
ha, ok
And I know you hate me kid so forgive my cocky attitude
But how can Daubs intimidate me when even the mods keep feeling bad for you?
I guess this was suposed to be a personal but I wasn't really feelin' it
Yeah I lost the belt to butler.....he's pretty good you cunt
But you been in the league twice as long as me
And never been to the champ ships once.........
haha, dope shit here
Fuck wordplay, my personals making you flop more
this loss is graphic, like the ONLY thing RV will give you props for
haaa. dope ender, your last two bars were your best, nice way to end it


Daubs.

yeah your a prick and on my dick but il let it slide
cause we all need t 'avarez....after heavy exercise
decent, didn't really catch the wordplay tho
kemps against me, but fuck it cause that kids wack
so how you NOT gonna find dirt on me when it comes from his mag
wtf? .. lol
wack fuck acts tuff but his raps suck, i know im doubtin em
cuz hows he gonna man up when he's known for goin down on them
lines like this are played, but I liked how u did this ..
and your girls prolly cheatin now the les, n' aint hatin son
but how can she not like a bit of pussy when shes dating one
blah ok
im in the top 10 despite kempos efforts to get me laying off
whereas your in the top 10 as a result of his effort paying off
blah
now butler wont be battlin this week, and i know that its sad
but he got locked up on sex charges after raping you so bad
lmfao ..
and that wasnt just painful, it was murder that you cant controll
and you shit yourself so bad yur organs rolled outa your arsehole
eh, decent closer.


uh.

close battle, more like ehh. Tavarez came decent, Daubs came a lil bit less than decent. Daubs punches didn't seem like they was punches towards tavarez (some of them). Iouno, just wasn't feelin some of them .. the butler line was cool, everything else was decent. Tavarez' last two bars is what took the battle for him. They was haymakers, while Daubs really didn't have any haymakers.


Vote - Tavarez.

So.Rell 07-14-06 12:06 AM

Daubs I KO"D you 5 times, you left the battle broke jerk
So fuck a win bitch, you gotta try and get some votes 1st
We meet again? Im'a splatter and end him
Cuz if 'threes's a charm'......then six has got to be a platinum pendant
Yeah I lost the belt to butler.....he's pretty good you cunt
But you been in the league twice as long as me
And never been to the champ ships once.........
Fuck wordplay, my personals making you flop more
this loss is graphic, like the ONLY thing RV will give you props for

vs.

wack fuck acts tuff but his raps suck, i know im doubtin em
cuz hows he gonna man up when he's known for goin down on them
and your girls prolly cheatin now the les, n' aint hatin son
but how can she not like a bit of pussy when shes dating one

Both verse had personals thats what I like to see, but some of the wording could have been better to make the punch hit harder. I like how Tav added Wordplay in his personals spices it up more of a punch...Daubs your only problem was your wording and some of the personals were weak.

Vote - N.Tavarez

N.Tavarez 07-14-06 01:33 PM

4-0 upping

N.Tavarez 07-14-06 02:12 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2793609
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2793607
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231347
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231337

King Solo 07-14-06 02:50 PM

Fuck is Kemp supposed to do? LBL competition is plenty
Plus your ass is outmatched by most of the cats that IN the top twenty
And the tag tourneys the biggest indication you suck whore
Caught a loss in a battle ONLY YOU showed up for? damn
Fuck wordplay, my personals making you flop more
this loss is graphic, like the ONLY thing RV will give you props for

VS.

now butler wont be battlin this week, and i know that its sad
but he got locked up on sex charges after raping you so bad


First off can I say, "WOW!"
Daubs came fucking mad wack in this battle. I was nice enough to quote that rape bar because it was a personal, and mildly funny. But the rest of your verse man was fucking weak. Some of it sounded like gibberish when I read it, I had to read like half the verse over because it made no sense... SLOPPY WORDING!! That Tavarez nameplay would've been nice if it hadn't been used on him before by Daz.
Anyway, Tav dropped hot. His verse was pretty much consistent on an average level with some harder bars thrown in. The opener and closer from Tav were fucking beasts, and that personal about him in the tag tourney was nice. The rest of the verse fell short of getting quoted due to some played shit and the wording on some punches could've been better.

Overall though, this was a fucking one-sided battle and Tav clearly took it.

V/ - N.Tavarez


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