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07-09-06, 10:22 AM
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9. N.Tavarez (6-1) vs 10. Daubs (9-6)
IP: 85D6 9262
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07-09-06, 05:08 PM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: 3A9D 1961
here we go again, GL lad.
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07-10-06, 08:56 AM
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the medicine man
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IP: B26C 448D
im probably keeping it a short 10
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07-13-06, 12:04 PM
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the medicine man
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IP: B26C 448D
9. N.Tavarez (6-1) vs 10. Daubs (9-6)
Daubs just keeps having the hard opponents. It’s pretty harsh really as his record looks shite, where as he’s a lot better than it. If he loses he’ll go to 9-7 which will be a very bad reflection of him. This should be pretty close though, but I think Tavarez will edge it out. Quote:
Fuck is Kemp supposed to do? LBL competition is plenty Plus your ass is outmatched by most of the cats that IN the top twenty And the tag tourneys the biggest indication you suck whore Caught a loss in a battle ONLY YOU showed up for? damn Daubs I KO"D you 5 times, you left the battle broke jerk So fuck a win bitch, you gotta try and get some votes 1st We meet again? Im'a splatter and end him Cuz if 'threes's a charm'......then six has got to be a platinum pendant And I know you hate me kid so forgive my cocky attitude But how can Daubs intimidate me when even the mods keep feeling bad for you? Yeah I lost the belt to butler.....he's pretty good you cunt But you been in the league twice as long as me And never been to the champ ships once......... Fuck wordplay, my personals making you flop more this loss is graphic, like the ONLY thing RV will give you props for capish? Last edited by N.Tavarez : 07-13-06 at 01:26 PM. |
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07-13-06, 01:02 PM
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the medicine man
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IP: B26C 448D
fucking loser drop already!
you beeeeen online |
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07-13-06, 01:09 PM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: 559E C80B
I just got in from work and am gonna start writing soon.
Shut the fuck up. |
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07-13-06, 01:34 PM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: 2EFF 9B5F
Kemp can suck a dick with his shit rules...
yeah your a prick and on my dick but il let it slide cause we all need t 'avarez....after heavy exercise kemps against me, but fuck it cause that kids wack so how you NOT gonna find dirt on me when it comes from his mag wack fuck acts tuff but his raps suck, i know im doubtin em cuz hows he gonna man up when he's known for goin down on them and your girls prolly cheatin now the les, n' aint hatin son but how can she not like a bit of pussy when shes dating one im in the top 10 despite kempos efforts to get me laying off whereas your in the top 10 as a result of his effort paying off now butler wont be battlin this week, and i know that its sad but he got locked up on sex charges after raping you so bad and that wasnt just painful, it was murder that you cant controll and you shit yourself so bad yur organs rolled outa your arsehole rushed last few. |
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07-13-06, 01:49 PM
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the medicine man
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IP: B26C 448D
ready for votes
Last edited by N.Tavarez : 07-13-06 at 02:11 PM. |
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07-13-06, 02:46 PM
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I Hurt.
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IP: E98E E7FA
And the tag tourneys the biggest indication you suck whore
Caught a loss in a battle ONLY YOU showed up for? damn And I know you hate me kid so forgive my cocky attitude But how can Daubs intimidate me when even the mods keep feeling bad for you? Yeah I lost the belt to butler.....he's pretty good you cunt But you been in the league twice as long as me And never been to the champ ships once......... vs. yeah your a prick and on my dick but il let it slide cause we all need t 'avarez....after heavy exercise I liked Tav's verse due to its personal nature. A few of the personals coulda used more wit to them instead of bein' stated blandly, but most of them were done pretty well. Daubs, opener was nice though a bit forced. If Butler really wasn't battling this week that line woulda been quotable, but he is. Other stuff was aight, but Tav just came more consistent and harder so he got this. Vote - N. Tav |
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07-13-06, 05:44 PM
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
And the tag tourneys the biggest indication you suck whore
Caught a loss in a battle ONLY YOU showed up for? damn Daubs I KO"D you 5 times, you left the battle broke jerk So fuck a win bitch, you gotta try and get some votes 1st We meet again? Im'a splatter and end him Cuz if 'threes's a charm'......then six has got to be a platinum pendant And I know you hate me kid so forgive my cocky attitude But how can Daubs intimidate me when even the mods keep feeling bad for you? Yeah I lost the belt to butler.....he's pretty good you cunt But you been in the league twice as long as me And never been to the champ ships once......... vs. nothing, imo! daubs, wow! what happened to you? that shit was either mad rushed, or just not tryin man. like, u either need to take some time off or start tryin more in your battles. u really came weak this time. but tavarez, alot that shit was FIRE man. really feelin ur verse and the personals! like, nice shit man. wish you would'a drop'd like this with u and butler last week, still. dope sonz. keep droppin more shit like this. v/ hotshhh!
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07-13-06, 09:15 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 5436 00A0
Tavarez
Fuck is Kemp supposed to do? LBL competition is plenty Plus your ass is outmatched by most of the cats that IN the top twenty okay wording was a bit off, but nice personal And the tag tourneys the biggest indication you suck whore Caught a loss in a battle ONLY YOU showed up for? damn decent Daubs I KO"D you 5 times, you left the battle broke jerk So fuck a win bitch, you gotta try and get some votes 1st again. decent. We meet again? Im'a splatter and end him Cuz if 'threes's a charm'......then six has got to be a platinum pendant ha, ok And I know you hate me kid so forgive my cocky attitude But how can Daubs intimidate me when even the mods keep feeling bad for you? I guess this was suposed to be a personal but I wasn't really feelin' it Yeah I lost the belt to butler.....he's pretty good you cunt But you been in the league twice as long as me And never been to the champ ships once......... haha, dope shit here Fuck wordplay, my personals making you flop more this loss is graphic, like the ONLY thing RV will give you props for haaa. dope ender, your last two bars were your best, nice way to end it Daubs. yeah your a prick and on my dick but il let it slide cause we all need t 'avarez....after heavy exercise decent, didn't really catch the wordplay tho kemps against me, but fuck it cause that kids wack so how you NOT gonna find dirt on me when it comes from his mag wtf? .. lol wack fuck acts tuff but his raps suck, i know im doubtin em cuz hows he gonna man up when he's known for goin down on them lines like this are played, but I liked how u did this .. and your girls prolly cheatin now the les, n' aint hatin son but how can she not like a bit of pussy when shes dating one blah ok im in the top 10 despite kempos efforts to get me laying off whereas your in the top 10 as a result of his effort paying off blah now butler wont be battlin this week, and i know that its sad but he got locked up on sex charges after raping you so bad lmfao .. and that wasnt just painful, it was murder that you cant controll and you shit yourself so bad yur organs rolled outa your arsehole eh, decent closer. uh. close battle, more like ehh. Tavarez came decent, Daubs came a lil bit less than decent. Daubs punches didn't seem like they was punches towards tavarez (some of them). Iouno, just wasn't feelin some of them .. the butler line was cool, everything else was decent. Tavarez' last two bars is what took the battle for him. They was haymakers, while Daubs really didn't have any haymakers. Vote - Tavarez.
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07-14-06, 12:06 AM
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Mic Jordan
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IP: EBE6 A230
Daubs I KO"D you 5 times, you left the battle broke jerk
So fuck a win bitch, you gotta try and get some votes 1st We meet again? Im'a splatter and end him Cuz if 'threes's a charm'......then six has got to be a platinum pendant Yeah I lost the belt to butler.....he's pretty good you cunt But you been in the league twice as long as me And never been to the champ ships once......... Fuck wordplay, my personals making you flop more this loss is graphic, like the ONLY thing RV will give you props for vs. wack fuck acts tuff but his raps suck, i know im doubtin em cuz hows he gonna man up when he's known for goin down on them and your girls prolly cheatin now the les, n' aint hatin son but how can she not like a bit of pussy when shes dating one Both verse had personals thats what I like to see, but some of the wording could have been better to make the punch hit harder. I like how Tav added Wordplay in his personals spices it up more of a punch...Daubs your only problem was your wording and some of the personals were weak. Vote - N.Tavarez
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07-14-06, 01:33 PM
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the medicine man
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IP: B26C 448D
4-0 upping
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07-14-06, 02:12 PM
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the medicine man
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07-14-06, 02:50 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 5BFB C1C7
Fuck is Kemp supposed to do? LBL competition is plenty
Plus your ass is outmatched by most of the cats that IN the top twenty And the tag tourneys the biggest indication you suck whore Caught a loss in a battle ONLY YOU showed up for? damn Fuck wordplay, my personals making you flop more this loss is graphic, like the ONLY thing RV will give you props for VS. now butler wont be battlin this week, and i know that its sad but he got locked up on sex charges after raping you so bad First off can I say, "WOW!" Daubs came fucking mad wack in this battle. I was nice enough to quote that rape bar because it was a personal, and mildly funny. But the rest of your verse man was fucking weak. Some of it sounded like gibberish when I read it, I had to read like half the verse over because it made no sense... SLOPPY WORDING!! That Tavarez nameplay would've been nice if it hadn't been used on him before by Daz. Anyway, Tav dropped hot. His verse was pretty much consistent on an average level with some harder bars thrown in. The opener and closer from Tav were fucking beasts, and that personal about him in the tag tourney was nice. The rest of the verse fell short of getting quoted due to some played shit and the wording on some punches could've been better. Overall though, this was a fucking one-sided battle and Tav clearly took it. V/ - N.Tavarez
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