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chorus- dukie
1st verse - pp2... i freestyled the whole thang, but still sumin to nod too ya dig
chorus- dukie
2nd verse- dukie
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ya 3 minute song give a quick listen ya dig

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Alot of energy on this track. Wayy too simple lyrics...No hate, I wasnt feeling this song that much..


Intro-I liked the intro the most. It was tight. I liked it.
Hook - Your hook could've been better. It was nice, but too many vocals on it.
Verse 1- Best verse in my opinion. Still simple rhymes, but nice energy. Nice delivery, it went with tha track and tha hook. Sounded kinda freestyled...But overall, a nice verse. Nothing to exciting though.
Verse 2- This verse was ight, but tha energy turned down a lil. It sounded like you was reading off a piece of paper...bad flow. You still had excitement, but it wasn't like the first verse.
Overall- THis was a ight track, not something I would bump. Could barely hear tha lyrics, and flow was kinda off...but still a nice track and you could only get better.

Nice shit...kkeep doing you!

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rtf

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longtime i aint heard something from you?


i am liking the beat but u shud have turned it up a lil more...verse 1 has a dragged flow..dude was dragging his rhymes..delivery is blur!




pp..ur verse has a better flow..u sounded more confident on the mic..this freestyle's gd for how long u been raping?..cool



hook's were tight..got me dancing


nice track ..hit my sig to rtf

whats whit the question marks.... and i was the first verse

hook was tight... had my head noddin..
ur verse was dope other cat was ok.. kinda slow... decent rhymes... i gave ya tha run down on msn.. thats wassup