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08-18-06, 01:53 AM
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10:23 till i'm 86
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pictureperfect2-"finger snap"
IP: AB1C 8937
chorus- dukie
1st verse - pp2... i freestyled the whole thang, but still sumin to nod too ya dig chorus- dukie 2nd verse- dukie .. ya 3 minute song give a quick listen ya dig left feed http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233596 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233409 valid links*
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08-18-06, 03:12 PM
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Put Yo Money On Me
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IP: CB5F 7EEE
Alot of energy on this track. Wayy too simple lyrics...No hate, I wasnt feeling this song that much..
Intro-I liked the intro the most. It was tight. I liked it. Hook - Your hook could've been better. It was nice, but too many vocals on it. Verse 1- Best verse in my opinion. Still simple rhymes, but nice energy. Nice delivery, it went with tha track and tha hook. Sounded kinda freestyled...But overall, a nice verse. Nothing to exciting though. Verse 2- This verse was ight, but tha energy turned down a lil. It sounded like you was reading off a piece of paper...bad flow. You still had excitement, but it wasn't like the first verse. Overall- THis was a ight track, not something I would bump. Could barely hear tha lyrics, and flow was kinda off...but still a nice track and you could only get better. Nice shit...kkeep doing you! *shake something* rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showt...601#post2821601
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08-18-06, 08:05 PM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 2E32 61F2
listening
longtime i aint heard something from you? i am liking the beat but u shud have turned it up a lil more...verse 1 has a dragged flow..dude was dragging his rhymes..delivery is blur! pp..ur verse has a better flow..u sounded more confident on the mic..this freestyle's gd for how long u been raping?..cool hook's were tight..got me dancing nice track ..hit my sig to rtf
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08-19-06, 02:23 AM
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: AB1C 8937
whats whit the question marks.... and i was the first verse
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08-20-06, 03:19 PM
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IP: 96F2 DF03
hook was tight... had my head noddin..
ur verse was dope other cat was ok.. kinda slow... decent rhymes... i gave ya tha run down on msn.. thats wassup
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